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a girl i once knew
By theBAC
Garden gates in starlight
I wish I may I wish you might
Forget whats been said and done
At least for this one night
Go back with me to a time before
Travel there Give me more
Forgive me for everything Christin
I hurt you and don’t know what for
In the past I see us golden
Don’t walk away
In the past I see us golden
In the past I see us golden
In the past I see us golden
Grant me a smile and then turn from me
In my mind I can see images of you and me
But its over I know that
Be happy with him for eternity
Live with him in apogee
So I won’t have to see
No more you and me
Forgotten sincerity
In my heart we spin in perigee
Loving in equality
Making love’s duality
I need to forget you now
And it will come somehow
In the past I see us golden
Please walk away
In the past I see us golden
In the past I see us golden
In the past I see us golden
In the future I don’t see anything
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Copyright 2004 Brett Alan Coker
Published on Tuesday, February 17, 2004.
Filed under:
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Comments on "a girl i once knew"
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On Sunday, November 26, 2006, Mari
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wrote:
sometimes you amaze me dude
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On Monday, September 20, 2004, stuart_pid
(135) wrote:
i like how you threw the little nursery rhyme in there. this is an excellent poem with a lot of sorrow. i like the repetition of the last line also, makes it sink in.
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A former member wrote:
wow holy fuckin shit. this was good. killer poem.
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On Friday, June 18, 2004, aXe FactoR
(333) wrote:
a lot of pain in this piece... held my attention from beginning to end..."in the past i see us golden"...wow...i liked the depth of emotions in this piece. rad, really. -MeL-
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A former member wrote:
Damn, I can't stop reading this, I'm in love with it..! It starts off so beautifully, and maintains that standard all the way to the end. Amazing. ~Wish Upon A Star
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