Comments by All Members
- ""like a whisper..wrapped inside a dream"
Ah this is so beautiful, I don't know what to say.. It reminds me of a poem I wrote once but didn't post.. ~Wish Upon A Star"
Posted by Unknown on "Consistent distraction" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "Certain parts of this lead me to believe you truly don't want to be left alone. However, your frustration is not without reason. Good luck sorting out these thoughts."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "Leave Me Alone" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "...why is it so hard for people to tell the truth?people just aren't happy if they aren't playing stupid mind games.i feel you,Jaded. the way you structured this was incredible.-tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "Open 2 Interputation" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "wow...you keep getting better and better...this is so passionate..."this road I've chosen only goes one way"...excellent...this poem really bummed me out,though...do you need a hug,baby?-tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "Leave Me Alone" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "Oo, fun. I like how the end disintegrates into a barely-cohesive but still clearly meaningful string of words. Also, "sexual motion/impedes/emotional/devotion" is an interesting thought. You gave the one-word stanzas a damn good go - keep it up!"
Posted by stormtalk on "About Last Night (adult content)" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "gen x... gen x and everything after for that matter... what is this world we've come into... you leave me with questions and with a feeling of the rhythm of the displaced generations"
Posted by Jonas on "XXXGENERATIONXXX old DP" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "chills.. i could feel them as i read this.. i can just feel the helplessness of eager emotion. the thoughts of obsorbed pain. if only. what it, and why did this happen.. great write. ~Bluegoddess~"
Posted by Bluegoddess on "Before" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "holy shit, i can completely relate to this. wouldnt it be so nice if things could just return to the way things used to be? then again you wouldnt know what you know if things never happened.. love this one. ~Bluegoddess~"
Posted by Bluegoddess on " Hesitation" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "Bahhhh they exist though few they do exist! Just keep your eyes open and watch carefully for him sometimes hes hard to recognize till its too late!
And great piece I really like it!"
Posted by Unknown on "This Is Who I am...Myself" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "I would like to say something half intelligent to this, but for the fact that you blew my mind, I'll leave it at: A fine slice of the mind and perception of the world today. Brilliant"
Posted by Unknown on "XXXGENERATIONXXX old DP" by Jaded Jezzabelle
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