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About Last Night (adult content)
By Jaded Jezzabelle
I like the one word stanza thing so much,
I have to give it a go...tell if you like
THIS IS
ABOUT LAST NIGHT
catching light
eyes
detach fight
fingers
on
skin
lips trace
softly
taste
devine places
attention
erase
intentions
of
another
hair pulled
tight
undone
buttons
lace on flesh
desire
between thighs
on
fire
voyeristic tendencies
sight
unseen
sexual motion
impeads
emotional
devotion
from behind
trapped
within
embrace
hot
shivers spine
grind
inside
once more
harder
breath comes
questions
lies
dirty minds
fuck
faces
hands knees
bound
before
thrashed tremble
whore
all fours
crashes
pleads
vengence
waves
orgasmic
passions
core
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Copyright 2004 Jadedwings
Published on Friday, January 23, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "About Last Night (adult content)"
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A former member wrote:
This came out extremely well, had a very sweaty intense feel to it. Very nicely done:) ~Ship!
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On Friday, January 23, 2004, stormtalk
(727)
wrote:
Oo, fun. I like how the end disintegrates into a barely-cohesive but still clearly meaningful string of words. Also, "sexual motion/impedes/emotional/devotion" is an interesting thought. You gave the one-word stanzas a damn good go - keep it up!
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