Comments by All Members
- "I don't think you give yourself enough credit, miss... .this was sorrowful but very real. "
Posted by Cassette on "Dream Girl " by Elle Amore
- "This makes me sad. "The one you say you don't want | Until someone else has her." This line really changed the feel for me. From a poem about a random 'chick' possibly even a girl one would have a fling with, to someone real, relatable, and someone I miss - even though I don't know you. Well done."
Posted by Adam on "Dream Girl " by Elle Amore
- "It's the silent desires deep in the night that can truly define love, those anxious moments when we can't think of anything else, if I could give this a 20, I would."
Posted by Unknown on "The Tale of Jack and Lucy" by Elle Amore
- "...a sensual tone in this, rising smoky thru the sorrow. hands lingering in a tender place that still feels the pressure of other hands..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "The Half Of It" by Elle Amore
- "simply beautfiul, that one kiss that will forever stick with you, haunt your dreams and waking hours. Nicely penned! "
Posted by Unknown on "In The Dark" by Elle Amore
- "...artful rendering of a short span of time, lovers drifting toward each other, a kiss permanently stained in the memory..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "In The Dark" by Elle Amore
- "... New Favorite. It's very rare for me to even click on a new poets writing until they've established some "Site" time. This blew me away. "Borrowed time" especially. It takes me back to ... places. And people. Thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "Modern Day Mona Lisa" by Elle Amore
- ""plaid shirt night and banana pancake mornings" such a personal line that I can almost taste... The last line packs a pinch. Write on :) Welcome to DP!"
Posted by Unknown on "Jail Cell Markings" by Elle Amore
- "I think Aristotle denied there was such a thing as common sense, as did Nietzsche, or at least, if it were common, then it wasn't good/valuable. I liked the detailed way each sense was incorporated.... a complete jealousy... had a diary type tone to it, maybe. thanks."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Common Senses" by Elle Amore
