Comments by All Members
- "The depths of your pondering mind is astronomical! When I read you, I know I will be brought to the farthest reaches of the universe. I just did a collaboration with a dear friend of mine, concerning, Samsara. "The collective connection is beyond comprehension" - Much enjoyed this one! - blue angel"
Posted by blue angel on "Hollow Goodbye" by Sean Mc Shane
- "as it was written , so it shall be ? ... maybe in another parallel universe , the one we're not in :P ... sufficiently bitter, seasoned with a hefty dose of reality ... dream on :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Hollow Goodbye" by Sean Mc Shane
- "I've missed reading you. "....between a new idea and a lost thought" such a relatable place. I'm glad I checked in for this gem -XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Thunder Crush" by Sean Mc Shane
- "You need the DeLorean if your going anywhere buddy. I was thinking about a poem similar to this last night. I love the authors note. "
Posted by Unknown on "Hollow Goodbye" by Sean Mc Shane
- "This is spectacular, Sean!! "There's a million ways to describe the smoke" Damn I love that line! You never disappoint!! Best to you always! - blue angel"
Posted by blue angel on "Thunder Crush" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Sounds like a long distance romance that only becomes more heated in the absence Sean. Nothing better than the soothing beat of angel wings to cool the fevered brow. Keep those horns filed and she'll never know (yes she will) - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Our Everything" by Sean Mc Shane
- "It's not such a long time, really. Nice imagery Sean and the couplets gave just the right amount of roominess to let it sink-in and yet convey the feeling of space. BTW - nobody ever mentions the much neglected inner rim. Sweetly said laddie!"
Posted by dwells on "Always and Forever" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Love poetry is so pretty, and brings a bitter taste to my mouth. Good write, I hope you find happiness in that which brings me turmoil. 9/10."
Posted by Kristoff on "Always and Forever" by Sean Mc Shane
- "This is a very hunting piece. It read smoothly and that is always a huge bonus for me when reading poetry. Well done. "
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Memory Lane" by Sean Mc Shane
- "This is really beautiful. She must have really had your heart. I'm sorry that something happened that you no longer need to say these words... "
Posted by Unknown on "Three Little Words" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Devestating, Indeed. How someone could just forget. I'm with specter on this.. how this reminds me of so much. Penned to perfection, those heartstrings are tugging again.. the only real thing. How can I say? This made me die inside and urges me to reach out to One I long forgot.. thank You so much!!"
Posted by Unknown on "Our Everything" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Just beautiful... Memories can both..bring us joy and bitterness.. But they remind us too that we have lived and grown.. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Memory Lane" by Sean Mc Shane
- "What a truly beautiful piece! Reading it was like living a wonderful dream and I felt deep peace inside of me.. Such powerful and positive reading made my day... Thank you! :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Always and Forever" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Only the lucky chosen few get to experience "always and forever" I think. Your words describe these scenes so well I could actually envision it as I read, but I imagine that is as close as I'll ever get of experiencing it. Great write Sean, I enjoyed this piece. Later............................ ~ACE~"
Posted by Peyton1 on "Always and Forever" by Sean Mc Shane
- "you must think much of this person. I like the way you wove in the fantasy element, which makes me believe you have not actually met the person, or perhaps it is that feeling of togetherness you miss. in any case I enjoyed reading it."
Posted by Patches on "Our Everything" by Sean Mc Shane
- "sounds like the days of comfort in anothers words are missed dearly. I love how you used some of the elements of fantasy to express your longing for this person. I think its beautiful and you did a great job piecing this together. awesome sean!"
Posted by haunted on "Our Everything" by Sean Mc Shane
- "That was really well done Sean, took me on a journey ya did. This one runs deep, doesn't it? Beyond devastating, yeah I know that feeling too. To miss someone that deeply, the love had to have been almost unimaginably strong. I miss someone like that still as well. Awesome job dude, as always.............. ~ACE~"
Posted by Peyton1 on "Our Everything" by Sean Mc Shane
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