Comments by All Members
- "Wow, and still she runs I'm guessing, and maybe always will. Sorry and thanks for sharing."
Posted by dwells on "Run" by Dragonfly
- "Interesting structure and message was quite adult, thanks for posting this, much enjoyed - cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "The truth" by Dragonfly
- "Video games are just one facet of the one-eyed monster that is controlling younger people especially. Cell phones, ipods. ereaders, lap tops, PC monitors, text messaging, Facebook, MySpace, gamers, etc. Get lost in a world of electronic amusement when there are no jobs, still at home with mon and dad, and every night is Saturday night - get drunk, get stoned, get trashed. Not teaching longhand script, losing personal communication skills, become withdrawn, depressed, and selfish. Call me a dinosaur... We all reap the consequences."
Posted by dwells on "Video Games" by Dragonfly
- "...the way you set up this poem, putting the truth over there out of reach...& so it is in life."
Posted by FadedBlues on "The truth" by Dragonfly
- "Sounds like you may be the man in the middle, so near and yet so far maybe. This was a beautiful characterization of slowly being tortured by something unattainable, or feared perhaps. Cheers and thanks PD."
Posted by dwells on "Sail Away From Me" by Dragonfly
- "Come into the light Barney! Sorry you seem to be so down in this piece. Hope you had a good weekend, cheers man!"
Posted by dwells on "Sorrow" by Dragonfly
- "I always love reading your poems dino.. truely.. One of the best with all your different directions.."
Posted by Devilish on "Sorrow" by Dragonfly
- "I really enjoyed the image of the tango here, bridging a connection between living and death- very creative touch. The lines are also original with language- not an easy thing to do."
Posted by heterodynemind on "Sorrow" by Dragonfly
- "fuck yeah, i loved this. very dark, and this flowed very well. as does your other works. this is just a kick ass poem through and through dinos!"
Posted by haunted on "Sorrow" by Dragonfly
- "I think I knew the mother of this dark abyss perhaps? Sounds like she likes to blow out your candles too maybe. Thanks and cheers! Good bodies of water too, metaphorically speaking."
Posted by dwells on ".______." by Dragonfly
- "I don't know.. but the title is a "whale" and this story is about the ever so large whale, this biggest of mammals, who even with it's size is still dwarfed by the immense size of the ocean. I am just guessing this is about that."
Posted by Unknown on ".______." by Dragonfly
- "Sounds like a variation on the Pied Piper of Hamelin perhaps? Intriguing read and enjoyed the balance between warning and explanation, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Innocence" by Dragonfly
- "Thank you ^^ Believe it or not the two parts were actually written in two different years around this time of season... Somehow they fit, but I guess I'm just a genius like that... Just kidding (Maybe)"
Posted by Dragonfly on "Alone is a Beautiful Word" by Dragonfly
- "wow, very nice and touching poem. it sounds lonely and sad. but thats what makes this poem so beautiful. excellent poem and its details enhance this so perfectly! a perfect 10!"
Posted by haunted on "Alone is a Beautiful Word" by Dragonfly
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