Comments by All Members
- "...tenderly forlorn. raindrops usher teardrops to a sweeter place..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Held" by Sin Amor
- "The word love is short, small but very powerful. Like this poem"
Posted by Damien on "Held" by Sin Amor
- "the first two words pulled me in and the last three left me nodding in agreement , though , I can't imagine the impact of experiencing it first hand... welcome home :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Fomenting earth." by Sin Amor
- "Soft and delicate, each line reminds me of my own past, in a way. Words you can relate to are the best kind."
Posted by RedPoetry on "Teahouse" by Sin Amor
- "This poem has such weight, such a presence and it is refreshing. It's the kind of work that once you read it, you just have to sit and think about it. Thank you for sharing. "
Posted by Unknown on "Crows on the 16th" by Sin Amor
- "Very articulate and educated. Most impressive piece with a few tweaks: barbArous, steEl body, unrelenTING. I only suggest because you are close to perfection, thanks"
Posted by dwells on "Chooser of the slain." by Sin Amor
- "i like how finely structured this was, like victorian lace, delicate and simply beautiful.
welcome to dp, and thank you for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "Teahouse" by Sin Amor
- "Very clean, classic lines, and the Japanese influence is felt through the whole atmosphere of the piece, in its refined delicacy. Though soaked in melancholia, the write is of much beauty and elegance. "
Posted by The Coloured Cello on "Teahouse" by Sin Amor
- "I love this...reminds me of those times when you really connect with another one on some deeper level...time flies without noticing...no awkward silences...until that inevitable moment of departure...and it's attendant sorrow...beautiful portrayal... :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Teahouse" by Sin Amor
- "excellent.... I truly admire the omission, the elision, that which is hinted, suggested, but left to the reader to gleam... you've worked this element into this work quite well, very rhetorically engaging, yessiree, and to do so in haiku sequence, provides form for appreciation as well as content... evocative write... I would so tuck you away in my list if my membership would so allow.... thanks for sharing your art."
Posted by Unknown on "Teahouse" by Sin Amor
- "Any one for a drink? Some jin... perhaps its not your cup of tea but oooh how good it feels... I take a shot in thoughts of you... I like that!"
Posted by Devilish on "Teahouse" by Sin Amor
- "This I've read countless times...It completely engulfs me.. so well structured for each set flows into the next with ease..the ambiance surrounds and envelopes..naturally..till we are in complete betrayal of a presumed expectation..killed by a laden emotion..thank you"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Teahouse" by Sin Amor
- "nicely wrought, almost a requiem, a prayer of asking... this servant... to seek... maybe, the Milton connection, the bard... perhaps the servant becomes the master.... rising up, haha, and becoming the god.... the infinite from the finite.... seek more than meets the eye, maybe. I like the norse mythology combined at the end.... loaded with allusion, yep, a very engaging write and polysemic. Thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "Abdiel" by Sin Amor
- "God, where does all this come from?!? These writes that I've read so far have been amazing pieces of poetry. Your writing is at such a depth. . .do you ever come up for air lol? But no, seriously, great job. Loved it!!!:)"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "Abdiel" by Sin Amor
- "Wow, now that was an amazing write! The imagery here was just phenomenal! June. 16 just happens to be my birthday too. Weird huh? Great piece. I cant say that enough. Awesome job. Two thumbs up!!"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "Crows on the 16th" by Sin Amor
- ""consciousness is a tangible liability" I really liked this phrase... you speckle your metaphors with profundity well... a nice mix of sensory and cerebral, and duty is as heavy as a mountain; indeed.... part of that tangible liability, is it not always the ethic that weighs heaviest..... I almost saw the birds as being the duty... about to splash into the lake, perhaps... well wrought, thanks for sharing *bows*"
Posted by Unknown on "Crows on the 16th" by Sin Amor
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