Fomenting earth.

By Sin Amor



Impetuous ship.
Whom takes me to distant shores.
Fine sands all around.

Yet all is the same
A gurgling, spinning earth,
Steel and gunpowder.

Strife, is organic.

Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited. Ask the author first.
Copyright 2014 Sin Amor
Published on Sunday, August 31, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Just back from deployment. The world is a sad place. We are privaleged to be so distanced from so much suffering.
Log In or Join (free) to see the special features here.

Comments on "Fomenting earth."

Log in to post comments.
  • Adagios On Wednesday, November 8, 2023, Adagios (716)By person wrote:

    Damn. This is heavy. Strong ink here

  • RedPoetry On Saturday, December 20, 2014, RedPoetry (3)By person wrote:

    Loved it. Welcome back, please write more.

  • Sin Amor On Monday, September 1, 2014, Sin Amor (8)By person wrote:

    Thanks for the comments, and the spelling correction. Haha :)

  • FadedBlues On Sunday, August 31, 2014, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...1st hand witness to the agony on this spinning earth. 'steel,' I think, in your 2nd stanza...

Contribution Level

Sin Amor's Favorite Poets
Sin Amor's Favorite Works
Share/Save This Post



Join DarkPoetry Join to get a profile like this for yourself. It's quick and free.

How to Criticize Without Causing Offense
© 1998-2024 DarkPoetry LLC
Donate
[Join (free)]    [More Poetry]    [Get Help]    [Our Poets]    [Read Poems]    [Terms & Privacy]

Attention: Darkpoetry is now in maintenance mode and will be shutting down soon. Save your work if you wish to keep it.