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Abdiel
By Sin Amor
In that expanse of infinate capacity,
Territory of the Unfathomable.
Seeker and wielder of intransigent servitude,
Does she caress the
sinews of God?
Were there is a silhouette,
Imbedded against
the enlightened dusk.
The Foreign boundry of a radiant sheen,
Overtaken
by the drawing of a cimmerian shade.
Distend the insufficient,
Allow your benevolence to be sought,
As Freya sought Lothur,
And as Eir seeks the valiant.
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Copyright 2011 Sin Amor
Published on Thursday, June 30, 2011.
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On Tuesday, July 5, 2011, Sin Amor
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I appreciate the insight i get from this place. Thank you both.
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A former member wrote:
nicely wrought, almost a requiem, a prayer of asking... this servant... to seek... maybe, the Milton connection, the bard... perhaps the servant becomes the master.... rising up, haha, and becoming the god.... the infinite from the finite.... seek more than meets the eye, maybe. I like the norse mythology combined at the end.... loaded with allusion, yep, a very engaging write and polysemic. Thank you.
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On Thursday, June 30, 2011, Ladyhawke
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God, where does all this come from?!? These writes that I've read so far have been amazing pieces of poetry. Your writing is at such a depth. . .do you ever come up for air lol? But no, seriously, great job. Loved it!!!:)
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