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"This was a great find and I find myself relating. Well written and so easy to read and picture."
Posted by Purposelessness on "Ode To Love" by HeLlSeND

"there's a lot going on here... I like it! ~worm~"
Posted by worm on "Train Wreck" by HeLlSeND

"The pain of loss, the naive hope of redemption, and the scar from the last disappointment is all here within these few lines. Well written! "
Posted by Pride Ed on "elusive" by HeLlSeND

"I felt this one. It is well written. I loved your use of the word "flaccid". Awesome word choices."
Posted by Unknown on "XanEx" by HeLlSeND

"mhmm, these days rapping is all about coke, asses, sluts, and some cheesey music video, gangsters usually turn to rapping to get their stash transported easily, fame = money= power. this was a very nice piece, write on ."
Posted by punk mc cool on "rap sux" by HeLlSeND

"see! if you wuz really gangsta, you wouldn't need ta 'splain "Acs". knowumsayin? fuck dat. just spit dat shit. knowumsain? fuck 'em if dey don't unnerstand?....knowumsayin? fa real doe. all right. i'm done. i agree with you about the state of modern day hip hop but that's why you should stick to old skool -- when it was having fun, inciting awareness, etc. big daddy kane, biz markie, kris kross (that's right! fucking kriss kross!), d nice, krs one, pre-house of pain everlast when he was hanging out with ice T, nwa (don't matter just don't bite it), public enemy, kid n play, dj jazzy jeff and the fresh prince, eric b and rakim, wu tang clan, gang starr, nas, tupac, fuckin...fuckin...digital fuckin underground, getto boys...haha. that was the golden age and that was just off the top of my head. shit has definitely gone down hill. it'll swing back around. hip hop/rap is worth saving. "
Posted by Jedi MindFuck on "rap sux" by HeLlSeND

"That is great and very original you deserve the award"
Posted by Unknown on "rap sux" by HeLlSeND

"I like this. Its funny. I must say, there is SOME good rap out there, you just have to find it."
Posted by SaintNHB on "rap sux" by HeLlSeND

"excellent rhyme and flow.. a tragic, and sad piece, but well put together.i feel your pain. "
Posted by natalie on "Wordz" by HeLlSeND

"great work:)gives great imagery to the words written..."
Posted by Artanis on "Die, Bitch, Die" by HeLlSeND

"holly cow thats really good"
Posted by Unknown on "i still haven't figured it out" by HeLlSeND

"B E A U T I F U L ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !"
Posted by Unknown on "Die, Bitch, Die" by HeLlSeND

"Very cool. The rhyme and flow of this was great. Last two lines struck me with bitter irony. Hard to give up hope though. Nice job."
Posted by Dilated View on "War" by HeLlSeND

"10 out of 10 5 out of 5! I liked every part!"
Posted by Prophint on "Die, Bitch, Die" by HeLlSeND

"poetry incarnate! smooth and elusive words create a masterpiece!.......well done"
Posted by urbanhumility on "settled" by HeLlSeND

"a darker dawn kinda day, perhaps...... i miss the voice of sunrise (if that makes any sense). excellent piece."
Posted by elisa on "settled" by HeLlSeND

"fucking horrifying and i loved it!! Terrifies me but hey at least it's something to get off to..."
Posted by Unknown on "Die, Bitch, Die" by HeLlSeND

"Short and sweet with despair overtones. I like it."
Posted by ReddropX on "elusive" by HeLlSeND

"*laughs hysterically* KILL the bitches! *clears throat and calms down* Fucking AWESOME write!-Airi"
Posted by Niemand on "Die, Bitch, Die" by HeLlSeND

"holy shit.. im gonna make a mental note not to get on your bad side. :) good write"
Posted by Unknown on "Die, Bitch, Die" by HeLlSeND

"Amazing Write! Every Stanza rhymed But it did not subtract from the strength of this! Great choice of words and blazing imagery! Would also make a killer song!"
Posted by Spiral Downward on "Die, Bitch, Die" by HeLlSeND

"Wy U B3 hATinG oN tHiZ 0id gANztA??? Just Kidding, This Was Great! Nice Rhyme And Would Probably Make A Great Rap Song! Great Entry!"
Posted by Spiral Downward on "rap sux" by HeLlSeND

"ROFL, put a beat to that shit!"
Posted by Unknown on "Die, Bitch, Die" by HeLlSeND

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