Die, Bitch, Die

By HeLlSeND

the chaos now rages inside
it eats my love, destroys my pride
it's plain to see you're killing me
this emptiness that's filling me

makes me wish I never tried
but since I did, it's time you died
Now I fill with thoughts of hate
you and my hatchet have a date

hit tha grindstone make it gleam
yeah it’s sad, but we’re a team
the only one who’s stuck with me
unlike you, it don’t fuck with me

so now you face the pain I felt
see that sneer you had now melt
replaces faces with fear of death
you’ll soon pray for your last breath

tie the ropes, oh they’re too tight
good you fuckin’ bitch now fight
I’ll let you go, see now we’re even
Cause I lied, you’re never leavin’

Break your ankle, feel that pain
I should let you go insane
The way you left me just to waste
But this is only just a taste

Now out comes my little friend
Here comes the part that you can’t mend
Toes and fingers first to go
Bleed bitch bleed, it pleases so

Still this anger won’t subside
Can’t show you how you took my pride
So instead I’ll take you face
Now you’re finally in your place


Can you guess my inspiration?.....

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Copyright 2003 HeLlSeND
Published on Wednesday, October 1, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Artanis On Saturday, January 1, 2011, Artanis (56)By person wrote:

    great work:)gives great imagery to the words written...

  • A former member wrote: B E A U T I F U L ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

  • Prophint On Sunday, March 8, 2009, Prophint (17)By person wrote:

    10 out of 10 5 out of 5! I liked every part!

  • Anoblechicken On Tuesday, May 6, 2008, Anoblechicken (38)By person wrote:

    mmm that's pretty

  • A former member wrote: Revenge, >:) , love it.

  • A former member wrote: fucking horrifying and i loved it!! Terrifies me but hey at least it's something to get off to...

  • A former member wrote: LMAO. I love it

  • Niemand On Sunday, November 18, 2007, Niemand (361)By person wrote:

    *laughs hysterically* KILL the bitches! *clears throat and calms down* Fucking AWESOME write!-Airi

  • A former member wrote: holy shit.. im gonna make a mental note not to get on your bad side. :) good write

  • A former member wrote: ROFL, put a beat to that shit!

  • GraveFlower On Saturday, April 14, 2007, GraveFlower (249)By person wrote:

    SWEET Revenge is sweet oh god, horror all of it turns me on! awesome write, fuck yea that is so raw! ~*dani*~

  • A former member wrote: Wow, I really like how you made it so intense. It blew me away.

  • darth ren On Sunday, November 12, 2006, darth ren (30)By person wrote:

    yes! revenge is a dish best served cold!

  • Dissolving Poet On Tuesday, September 19, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    FUCK yeah, I wanted to read fucking more, and just lose myself, I loved the anger, o the anger I ravish in it~Gothic

  • Dissolving Poet On Thursday, April 6, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    This was fucking awesome and wicked it blew me away and I loved it to bits^.^ My kind of write

  • A former member wrote: lol fuckin wicked; you definitely did your emotions justice with this, cuz i felt each and every line in the back of my head. if you can't kill 'em for real, easy solution: kill 'em some other way.

  • A former member wrote: I am reminded of a song "Die my bride!" LOL...this was very good...and your inspiration is obvious. Very nice choice! ;) Amazing inspiration to an amazing poet who writes amazing poems!

  • HeLlSeND On Thursday, October 9, 2003, HeLlSeND (40)By person wrote:

    awwww ::blushes::....i..::sniff::...p-p-p-promised myself...::sniff, sniff::.....i wouldn't c-c-cry...

  • A former member wrote: *hands HeLlSeND a hanky*

  • SilentStalker On Wednesday, October 1, 2003, SilentStalker (1066)By person wrote:

    ...that's the shit, dude!!! I appreciate the note at the end...kinda makes one feel special...no wonder why you're on my fav's... -Darun Scholar

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