elusive

By HeLlSeND

silent screams
of things long lost
colored dreams
love holocaust
all but tossed
these feelings are
and still the most
elusive scar
draws you in
the web of hope

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© 2007 HeLlSeND
Published on Sunday, November 25, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Pride Ed On Monday, June 16, 2014, Pride Ed (107)By person wrote:

    The pain of loss, the naive hope of redemption, and the scar from the last disappointment is all here within these few lines. Well written!

  • ReddropX On Monday, November 26, 2007, ReddropX (20)By person wrote:

    Short and sweet with despair overtones. I like it.

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