rap sux

By HeLlSeND

Sick of the same ol’ mutts
playin the same ol’ cuts
Rappin bout guns and butts
Sick of the when’s & the what’s
If I had a Benz and some sluts
Would you like me more
Or could you not ignore
The fact that I abhor
Every one of you whores
& Everyone of these doors
are locked in front of me
half cocked and full of weed
mind blocked from all the greed
ya’ll flock like bird to seed
I mock your pedigree
The doctor said to me
Yo, fuck that misery
So, suck it Destiny
I’ve got my own decree
It says that on your knees
Is where you need to be
But who am I to say
That all your rhymes are gay
When all my rhymes are wack
I guess this light attack
is really just a mack
To help point out the fact
that rap is way off track
jumped straight out the sack
to pimpin’ hoes and Ac’s(Acura’s)
& fillin’ streets with crack
But now it’s just an act
Your rappin’ talents lack
But I’ll get off your back


Damn i'm delerious.......5:30a.m. is way to late....er...early....er....fukkit ~HeLlSeND~

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Copyright 2003 HeLlSeND
Published on Sunday, September 21, 2003.     Filed under: "Lyrics"
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  • punk mc cool On Monday, September 5, 2011, punk mc cool (75)By person wrote:

    mhmm, these days rapping is all about coke, asses, sluts, and some cheesey music video, gangsters usually turn to rapping to get their stash transported easily, fame = money= power. this was a very nice piece, write on .

  • Jedi MindFuck On Monday, September 5, 2011, Jedi MindFuck (49)By person wrote:

    see! if you wuz really gangsta, you wouldn't need ta 'splain "Acs". knowumsayin? fuck dat. just spit dat shit. knowumsain? fuck 'em if dey don't unnerstand?....knowumsayin? fa real doe. all right. i'm done. i agree with you about the state of modern day hip hop but that's why you should stick to old skool -- when it was having fun, inciting awareness, etc. big daddy kane, biz markie, kris kross (that's right! fucking kriss kross!), d nice, krs one, pre-house of pain everlast when he was hanging out with ice T, nwa (don't matter just don't bite it), public enemy, kid n play, dj jazzy jeff and the fresh prince, eric b and rakim, wu tang clan, gang starr, nas, tupac, fuckin...fuckin...digital fuckin underground, getto boys...haha. that was the golden age and that was just off the top of my head. shit has definitely gone down hill. it'll swing back around. hip hop/rap is worth saving.

  • A former member wrote: That is great and very original you deserve the award

  • SaintNHB On Monday, September 5, 2011, SaintNHB (41)By person wrote:

    I like this. Its funny. I must say, there is SOME good rap out there, you just have to find it.

  • SilentStalker On Sunday, September 28, 2003, SilentStalker (1066)By person wrote:

    Never cared for rap...so this was quite a treat to see...I like it... -Darun Scholar

  • Six-Out On Sunday, September 21, 2003, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    Have you listened to me and Dave rap? It might change your whole perspective on shit. ;)

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