Comments by All Members
- "wow this is really my style of reading here, i really liked this it held my attention and was a great piece! i liked 'December is more cold And loneliness begins to mean being alone' very nice! "
Posted by frost bite on "Spies" by maddin foxxxy
- "*hugs maddin* I love the way you write. So sad yet beautiful... this shows the progression or combination well. its something I am for in myself. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Spies" by maddin foxxxy
- "You master words so well...I love the dramatic ending in this piece...such a calm tranquil beginning, leading to such...despair...beautiful."
Posted by Unknown on "Spies" by maddin foxxxy
- "i love this piece...especially the 4th and 5th stanza...i feel that way too, sometimes...it is difficult sometimes to feel happy when everybody is watching...then you feel insecure and bo back to solitude and the dark.... -l-"
Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "Spies" by maddin foxxxy
- "I really like the title to this piece. There is much depth to this theme that will have to go unexplained in this comment. It's the beauty of complete helplessness in slumber. Nice write again."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "Eyes Open" by maddin foxxxy
- "you amaze me yet again. the beauty you captured in a slumbered soul was enchanting. a pleasure to read. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Eyes Open" by maddin foxxxy
- "A most excellent piece. You always move me in the deepest of places and in the profoundest of ways."
Posted by Stranger on "Clock" by maddin foxxxy
- "If only I could write with that much power, wow, thats amazing, the metaphors and just the way it was stated, wow!"
Posted by frost bite on "Clock" by maddin foxxxy
- "DAMM... A cycling illusion, the labyrinth of time so constant yet always so damm different. A soul you love is a soul you'll never forget.. Awesome Poem..Thanks ~P.B~ "
Posted by pushblood on "Clock" by maddin foxxxy
- "There are so many great parts to this piece. You're work continues to blow my mind. Excellent stanzas the whole way down, and excellent conclusion."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "Clock" by maddin foxxxy
- "wow indeed. you say my work has wise words. i beg to differ. this is work is to beautiful and vivid with color and images. ..wow ~Drea~"
Posted by Drea on "Clock" by maddin foxxxy
- "oh wow maddin, your words are always beautiful. There are so many different aspects about this work that are killer. Bit of reincarnation, happy facade, and the touch of hope that you describe.. just wonderful. You rock. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Clock" by maddin foxxxy
- "Ok... You need to tell me how to tap your creativity and wordplay. It definately can be hard to tell the difference between the sincere and the pretenders. It looks like that would leave us with a hopeful thought."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "Pretentious Affair" by maddin foxxxy
- ""I can only detach from everything I know... And change into some other kind of skin.... " good line. overall, great poem. -kirstyn"
Posted by wilted on "Pretentious Affair" by maddin foxxxy
- ""And did you fit in the movie I made for us?" Great line! I really enjoyed reading this poem, S. Even though I do not like the hurt you mustve felt but its not yur pieces pasted its the fools pretentious lies who thought he was pasting yu whos in pieces "
Posted by Unknown on "Pretentious Affair" by maddin foxxxy
- "...as you say so perfectly, "Everything at first fills in a pleasure-like steam..." I'm sure u felt u lost a few pieces, but life is a huge puzzle w/ lots of missing pieces, or pasted in wrong places, wrong times, faraway..."
Posted by Unknown on "Pretentious Affair" by maddin foxxxy
- "...if his kiss was all in pretension & lies, then he deserved not the beauty that is you. U got a great poem out of that fool's pasted piece of nothing Everything at first fills in a pleasure-like steam. .."
Posted by Unknown on "Pretentious Affair" by maddin foxxxy
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