Comments by All Members
- "Unfortunately for the king, his coronation was a drug induced hallucination haha. I can only imagine that this kingdom resembles the Land of Oz, complete with flying monkeys. Another ingenious comedic piece, thanks."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "The Merry King Goes Green" by Malcholm Dark
- "Haha yeah, damn you Roy Rogers. A cowboy is only as great as his horse, unfortunately the horse is usually the second banana. Write onward my friend. Hi-ho silver away! *Gallops off into the sunset.""
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "A Working Mans Horse" by Malcholm Dark
- "lol, is it sad that I thought of "BrokenCYDE" when I read this? Quite interesting and amusing; I like it :P"
Posted by Quietus on "Gal-Boy" by Malcholm Dark
- "Haha "Hasta la vista, baby", poor Mary, now all she has is her little lamb. I'm glad I did read between the lines, doing so cheered me up. I guess that's why we right poetry in privacy, for self-pleasure ;). Write onward my friend."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Read Between The Lines" by Malcholm Dark
- "lol...to pleasure yourself Malcholm?... surely not...what a cynical lil piece......... as pure as the driven snow...don't go where the huskies go...golden slushie...yellow"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Read Between The Lines" by Malcholm Dark
- "I think its interesting that in the poem, you took your feeling out on the mother instead of the father, when in reality, it was probably the dads fault. "
Posted by Unknown on "Why Mommy" by Malcholm Dark
- "lmao....oh my god man - just what I needed this morning; a fat Ricky Martin popping away to his one hit wonder moment of fame!! The irony and the sense of parody...and the bathos were spot on; this gave me a ton of laughs.......you're the perfect antidote to all that self-important depressive (and usually completely crap and cliched) attempt at 'darkness'....this was a wild ride into the failures of fame; clinging to that one moment that might make them a 'somebody' again; yet the years have caught them up and they're in no way fit to be on that stage......cringe-inducing hilarity; loved how refreshing and funny a concept this one is.....kudos for your versatility :D"
Posted by stryder on "Fat men in the rain--Drinkin' my cafe mocha" by Malcholm Dark
- "haha... I'd heard the nun joke before..... ya know, in logic those paradoxical statements can be sorted out through second order predicate logic whereby one distinguishes the claims about the subject from the medium for making the claim... thus the expression itself is understood as not self contradictory but rather being a member of a different class (set theory) than the class of that which it asserts a property.... just a thought :) on the other hand.... there is no conscious life without dogma.. belief, faith, asserting without proof, expectations of future (what is not yet or not at all or may never be).... but, of course, that inherent state of asserting without evidential foundation or inductive reasoning is still a far cry from asserting some omi this or omni that or eternal such and such.... fun read, very thoughtful.... the joke.... haha, I like the nun joke.... get thee to a nunnery! cheers, mate!"
Posted by Unknown on "Life In Paradox City" by Malcholm Dark
- "Such tragedy, and it happens all too often. I for one can attest to the father being neglectful. My dad always kept a gun in his dresser, but luckily I knew enough not to play with it. Some are not so lucky, and you're rage is completely understandable. Write onward."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Why Mommy" by Malcholm Dark
- "I like how this pleads with 'mommy'... emphasizing her loss, her helplessness, when it's probably more likely that the father was neglectful, as you mention in the note.... well done, just had one on the news the other day. "
Posted by Unknown on "Why Mommy" by Malcholm Dark
- "Yes, a terrific point...it's always the "unloaded" ones, ain't it? A justifiable anger & sadness here, Malcholm....gotta admire this passion...an excellent point! Take care with the damn guns, people!"
Posted by Unknown on "Why Mommy" by Malcholm Dark
- "Fuck! Let me gather myself so can respond! I still have chills...took my breath away twice in the same few seconds... I bow..."
Posted by Devilish on "Why Mommy" by Malcholm Dark
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