I Swear To God... An ode to all poems of insanity
By Malcholm Dark
I
swear to God...
I am in pain, I am not well
Horror shall
reign, I feel like hell.
I swear to God, I am not me.
I swear to God...
I am in pain, I am not me
Horror
shall reign, you'll die for me!
I swear to God, I am not
well.
I swear to God...
I cut you up, that's what I
did
I sealed you up inside my fridge.
I swear to God,
it set me free.
I swear to God...
I cut you up,
it set me free
I sealed you up inside of me.
I swear
to God, that's what I did.
I swear to God...
You paid
the toll, I went too far
A backyard hole, that's where you are.
I swear to God, my axe, my knife.
I swear to God...
You paid the toll, my axe, my knife
A backyard hole--DECAYING
life!
I swear to God, I went too far.
I swear to
God...
The shrink said, "I can not be freed."
The law said,
"I'm an evil breed."
I swear to God, she paid what's due.
I swear to God...
The shrink said, "she had paid what's
due."
The law said, "I will pay mine, too."
I swear to
God, I can't be freed!
I swear to God...
There is no
hope, there is no plea
The hangman's rope will set me free.
I swear to God, there's no glory.
I swear to God...
There is no hope, there's no glory
The hangman's rope ends my
story.
I swear to God, there is no plea!
I swear
to God...
I fell in flight with death in check
The rope
pulled tight around my neck.
I swear to God, I was insane.
I swear to God...
I fell in flight, I was insane
The rope pulled tight, a snap then pain!
I swear to God,
with death in check!
I cut her up, it set me free
I
swear to God...
you set me free!
Comments on "I Swear To God... An ode to all poems of insanity"
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On Monday, May 9, 2011, Ladyhawke
(392) wrote:
WOw, this was awesome. The repitition works so well. Beautifully weaved and written. Nice job!
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A former member wrote:
This is like a beautifully weaved spiderweb. All the key terms go together so beautifully...so darkly amazing... :)
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On Friday, April 22, 2011, Poe Etiquette
(124) wrote:
quite a refreshing style mirrored by its mocking tone. thank you
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A former member wrote:
Unbound darkness! There are no boundaries for your insanity, are there? :P
Loved it!
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A former member wrote:
This is unique and original even more so then most of your other works. I find this a breath of fresh air compared to the normality of forms of writing out there. I think the imagery and the repitition lent very much so to the poem and I think it threw it over the top.
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A former member wrote:
i love your format,i shall try it some time...exelent work.inspiring.
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On Monday, February 8, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
Interesting, I might have to try this, nice work
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A former member wrote:
I will have to try this out.
Thank you.