Comments by All Members
- "A very naturalistic vision of time and the healing process. These things are a state of mind and take as long as the mind needs. Painful."
Posted by Dilated View on "Murderous Clock" by Musik2MyEyes
- "A clever depiction of a rather grim perception of healing...Though I am not in your shoes. An excellent flow and message. "
Posted by Unknown on "Murderous Clock" by Musik2MyEyes
- "To take destruction, and turn it into something positive...takes a strong will. This poem flowed evenly and within it's contents you managed to capture an existance. Well read."
Posted by Unknown on "Why Am I Here?" by Musik2MyEyes
- "Narcissa said it - this seems almost too personal to comment....though I want to....but I don't even know where to begin..."
Posted by Unknown on "Why Am I Here?" by Musik2MyEyes
- "This sounds too personal to comment on...but, I will...rather or not it is...this hurt w/a familiar slap in the face. I have yet have the strength to share it with others...so thank you."
Posted by Narcissa on "Why Am I Here?" by Musik2MyEyes
- "please check out a charles bukowski book of poetry, even if it offends you. keep reading. he is a genious. words are only thoughts, thoughts are what makes us people. keep writing. i liked it."
Posted by Unknown on "I Need This So Much" by Musik2MyEyes
- "This is such an artistic way to answer a question. It makes the answer so much more powerful and meaningful. There is so much emotion here, and it is truly heart-wrenching. You want to know what I see? A powerful poet. Nice write. Be strong, dear."
Posted by wilted on "Why no current pictures?" by Musik2MyEyes
- "Thank you so much for the comment and the critique. I did go back and edit it...I read it over so many times before posting...and that line did trouble me but I couldn't put my finger on exactly why. I'm glad you pointed it out...thank you =)"
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "I Need This So Much" by Musik2MyEyes
- "One of the very rare poems that made me go "awww..." Very bittersweet and touching. One note I have for consideration is where you say "loud and clearly," you have an adjective and an adverb describing the same thing, so the agreement is off. Since "loud and clear" is a phrase, it is okay to leave them both as they are, even though they are modifying a verb. If you like the sound of clearly, I'd recommend changing loud to loudly. But, if you like the way they sounds together, by all means keep it the same. The poem kept me guessing the whole way through. There were hints here and there that the subject had passed, but it was never fully stated until the end. And when the realization hits, and a wave of emotions that has built up from the beginning pours. Sympathy, sorrow, regret... On and on. I thought this was very well done. Nice write."
Posted by wilted on "I Need This So Much" by Musik2MyEyes
- "what do we see when we look at the surface? who seeks to dwell there..... like some lily pad floating upon the pacific, ridin' waves like there were no shore.... looking up as if there were no down.... looking back as if there were no tomorrow. how could that be? "
Posted by Unknown on "Why no current pictures?" by Musik2MyEyes
- "There is more here than you are saying. It is deeper than we get to see. YOUR meaning is a beautiful representation of the lovely words you just gave. Sadness throughout, but a great write indeed. =)
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Posted by Unknown on "Why no current pictures?" by Musik2MyEyes
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