Riddles In the Dark: What Am I
By Musik2MyEyes
Reach out to touch
You miss by a mile
Music as such
Might
make you smile
I'll take up no room
So please don't
be frightened
I'm quiet and subtle
Your senses I've heightened
Return me
Or burn me
Forget me not
I seek something final
Is it cool
Is it hot
The answer...or subject of the riddle is...SOUL. First
the SOUL is invisible...there
is SOUL music...there is belief a
SOUL can be sensed, particularly by those
in belief of paranormal...you
may be able to help a soul return to a resting
place...or if cremated
like my brother, that's where the burning came in...as
far as the
ending...seeking something cool or hot...I was referring to
heaven
or hell.
Not very good really...done in just a few minutes. But it
was fun trying . And I did "tag" the answer but thought it would be good
to explain it.
=)
Author's Note:
Five minute riddle entry....Egads =PComments on "Riddles In the Dark: What Am I"
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On Tuesday, September 5, 2017, worm
(1194) wrote:
I liked this!
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A former member wrote:
You did really well for only five minutes ! :D
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A former member wrote:
I enjoyed it. Nice, quick, on the brink type of write.
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On Friday, April 2, 2010, IAmNorge
(39) wrote:
I 'm noticing that I really like your easy flowing rhyme schemes, everything i read of your always seams so right the way it is. And I do like riddles=]. ~Orion
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A former member wrote:
This is Embracing! An Amazing Write, it Reels in the Mind!
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On Monday, March 8, 2010, punk mc cool
(75) wrote:
well written :) but u should probably tell us what it is =P nah jking...
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A former member wrote:
ahhh! it's killing me!! what is the answer lol
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On Thursday, February 25, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
Clever writting. The flow was wonderful, it amazes me how much you say with so little verbage. Thanks for the write.
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A former member wrote:
Please send me a DP mail with the answer to this riddle.
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A former member wrote:
Poetic Element: 7/10
Meter: 2/5
Darkness of Subject Matter: 1/5
Creative Merit: 7/10