I Need This So Much
By Musik2MyEyes
What number do I dial?
What's the prefix?
What's the toll?
I would give up all the riches
To accompish
This one goal
Let there be a good connection
Please, no static
Not
tonight
Need these words heard
Loud and clear
Bring a
closing to my plight
Each of you has left
With no forewarning
No long term
It was not your voice that whispered
Of the passing
I can't affirm
I received the news by call
So I want
To do the same
Speak my heart to you
Release these words
Use them with your name
I never got to see you
Or hold
you
Or your hand
You slipped away so silently
Fleeting
Like hourglass sand
My chosen words are few
I'll keep
it brief
You'll see
Four altogether
Just real quick
You'll know they're just from me
I love you.
Goodbye.
.
.
.
.
.
411?
I need a number please
If only
Heaven had a telephone
Author's Note:
Something that's always been missingAwards
Comments on "I Need This So Much"
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A former member wrote:
Congratulations on getting Poem Of The Day! Reb:).
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A former member wrote:
please check out a charles bukowski book of poetry, even if it offends you. keep reading. he is a genious. words are only thoughts, thoughts are what makes us people. keep writing. i liked it.
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A former member wrote:
it almost brought a tear to my eye. It spoke to me the second i started reading it. Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
Great write girl. Expression was touching and well done. =)
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On Saturday, February 27, 2010, happilydepressed
(400) wrote:
flowed like blood from a wound
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On Saturday, February 27, 2010, T-Nothing
(38) wrote:
by far one of the most heartfelt and wrenching pieces i have seen in... quiet some time
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On Saturday, February 27, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
Powerful writting. The beginning sucked me right into the poem and the surprise ending was perfect. Thanks for being so original when you write.
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On Saturday, February 27, 2010, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
i had a feeling that would be how it ended. Nice way to describe that feeling and longing that you had/have. A touching piece
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A former member wrote:
Wow, I captured the feeling that was being described.