Comments by All Members
- "Not a bad write at all, I could feel the intensity from certain parts, "I used to pray for your happiness, now I pray for you to lay in piss" only the worst of enemies deserve that fate lol, writer's block be damned, write on."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "(J)ust (R)e(M)ember" by T-Nothing
- "i hope your lessons learnt from this hard life will make you strong enough to be who you ought to be happy with yourself. you seem unhappy with your past adventures"
Posted by natalie on "What about you?" by T-Nothing
- "this was really great. i could feel the regret in the piece and the right alignment added wonderfully. it almost made me feel as if i was missing part of the poem"
Posted by Unknown on "The No Named" by T-Nothing
- "I wish my drunken ventures led to the same reflective beauty that yours does. This was really good and a true view of the gift you have. Keep bringing it. Blessed to read it. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "The No Named" by T-Nothing
- "sometimes it takes a hell of a lot of courage to step out after 'stepping in' instead of folding to it and going nowhere... effectual, honest and open... nicely done"
Posted by NikesRain on "The No Named" by T-Nothing
- "This was quite an intriguing write, even if it was drunken and spontaneous thought, I see a person frustrated and distressed over their life in general, and at how the days of old have long since disappeared, so they pull the hood over their head to hide from that pain of loss, that's what I saw at least, well done. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "The No Named" by T-Nothing
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My pride is such a masochist whore.
Been bloody beaten and battered yet it begs for more. beautiful line what keeps us coming back? I feel I have to look up, to see rock bottom.
While in the devils chokehold, and he's laughing "I got 'em."
I think he plans on holding on, even after I'm rotten.
But I don't give it too long until even he has forgotten. yet another awesome line beautiful work indeed"
Posted by DeaD_Grl666 on "( I ) Scream" by T-Nothing
- "I too, have spent way too many nights with unanswered screams. Nothing worse sometimes. I liked your pattern, your words, what you were trying to say. Nice. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "( I ) Scream" by T-Nothing
- "A killer write my friend, very profound images for something you say is random. "While in the devil's chokehold, and he's laughing "I got 'em." I have to say that was one of my favorite parts, you've done it again."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "( I ) Scream" by T-Nothing
- "wow This gave me chiils. Very full of emotion and an excellent write! So many do not understand the harm they cause others in their ignorance. Stealing the innocence of a child by any means is the worst crime of all. I feel your pain. Keep up the great work."
Posted by DeaD_Grl666 on "Your Armageddon" by T-Nothing
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