A Bad Trip
By T-Nothing
There
it is, wondering around in the dark.
Cold and alone, basically
fallen apart.
A tall dark shadow, the remains of a man.
Who can make his pain felt, with one touch of his hand.
Tired
and weary, with a hooded black robe.
With no will and direction,
decided to let his life go.
As he draws closer, and begins
to speak.
All stands still, even the crunching leaves and creek.
And as he talks I begin to fill his pain.
The clouds engulf
the sun, and it slowly starts to rain.
His words stick in
me like daggers and knives...
And as I look up, I see tears
in his eyes.
Its so strange to see that haunting figure show
emotion.
He cries so hard that little creek becomes an ocean.
He continues to talk, of a life filled with torment.
And
feelings inside, that will forever remain dormant.
Unspeakable
feelings, that cannot be described.
And unforgettable feelings,
in which he almost died.
Rage, hatred, pain, sadness.
Guilt, loneliness, hopelessness, madness.
He grabs my hand,
and I see a flash of light...
And I'm taken to a place where if
I want to live, I have to fight.
A place where what you feel
seems worse than hell.
Hysterical and screaming, I come back,
knowing what I had felt.
He picks me up, and looks me in the
eyes.
He said ''That was my life, too hard, so I died''.........
There it is wondering around in the dark.
Cold and alone,
basically fallen apart.
A tall dark shadow, what remains I cannot
see.
Then...
I stand in shock, as I realize, that
creature... is me.
Comments on "A Bad Trip"
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A former member wrote:
Wonderfully dark ....well done
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A former member wrote:
Oh so dark! I think this is an amazing write.
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On Friday, February 12, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
masterful, a rip into darknes that I enjoyed reading. thankyou. write on.
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On Monday, January 4, 2010, theXkevorkian
(64) wrote:
I like your words .:) Visionary and thought provoking . I have one suggestion though I think it would flow better if it were in lines . evrything seems to run together .
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A former member wrote:
Thanks, for taking me with you on the trip to your realization :) (There were a lot of spelling errors, but nothing that can't be fixed). Welcome to dp.