Comments by All Members
- "it has been a long time since something has touched me, but this brought back memories of a truly painful time."
Posted by Nixx on "Drifter" by Soldier Of Silence
- "This is so in your head in a chaotic, instant snap shot kind of way, its an amazing write as it follows through without loosing focus but at the same time not seeming edited or forced "
Posted by Lylani on "Angry Persona" by Soldier Of Silence
- "damn..i think i got a fat lip just from
reading it!
wow..you moved us fast and tight,
I felt like I had to hold on to my
chair as you raced us through the room
and threw us into the Cage with you.
I enjoyed your ending too...touch
of humor....I thought to myself
damn...i guess there is something to
a calm and meek life!
lovely writing, very powerful!
you controlled the flow amazingly!
It forced us to journey with you
close to your side. Feeling and tasting
every sensation.
well done!
ears/Seattle
I usually write with a little more
air but you really clung to us
and it was a heck of an adventure!
"
Posted by Ears2hearyou on "Blackout Rumble" by Soldier Of Silence
- "I hope your brother comes home soon. I'm actually getting ready to leave the theatre right now and head back to the states...end of contract. But I have been over here for four or five months now. Been providing air support for the boots on the ground. Ya'll are very welcome and it was an honor to serve."
Posted by Soldier Of Silence on "Another Day at the Office" by Soldier Of Silence
- "My younger brother is currently in Iraq and this definitely makes a very outright and scary statement. I like that it's very dry and serious and to the point. Well done friend and if you are in some branch of the military please be careful. There are people here that thank you for your work at your office. Thank you --David--"
Posted by gnrrain on "Another Day at the Office" by Soldier Of Silence
- "The way your voice is uniquely a soldier's is something that I can really appreciate. The depths you describe are things I can only imagine a soldier has to endure and it humbles me. That and the skill of your articulation. This was wonderful. Thank you for sharing and thank you for serving as well!"
Posted by ALBATROSS on "Gun Lovers Anonymous" by Soldier Of Silence
- "You are very welcome. I have lost many brothers-in-arms since I have joined and I can't thank them enough for the service they have provided for our way of life. It makes me upset that I didn't join a different branch to do more to begin with. As long as we keep support in our troops and don't hate them for the job they are doing, then those that have fallen won't have done so in vain. This is just another job like any other, but we voluntarily put ourselves in harms way because we know others won't and sometimes we pay the ultimate price for that. We don't expect people to understand why we do it, but just to support us for providing the service we do even though sometimes we tend to lose sight of the whole purpose we started fighting in the beginning. Either way, as long as there are American boots on the ground on foreign soil, we need to support those boys and girls and get them home alive and safe if possible."
Posted by Soldier Of Silence on "Soldier of Silence" by Soldier Of Silence
- "This makes me sad, the process of war is so intense and really over-looked when we are the ones that are not involved. The soldiers are left forgotten and this really makes me think I need to express more gratitude daily for the hardships that all our soldiers do. Whether you agree with the war or not...you all are a blessing to us. Thank you for this and for the thought. "
Posted by Mylissa on "Soldier of Silence" by Soldier Of Silence
- ""As I thrust my spirit into you
Parting your lips,
In a deliciously lustful gasp" that is hot..."Tamed and docile
You crawl to your knees before me
Sucking my saturated skin clean
Tasting our combined ending" extremely hot...I am not tamable...though I may crawl on my knees...heheh :} Am I narcissistic enough yet...lol. I've decided this is for me..mmmm. Now that is good poetry. "
Posted by Mylissa on "Poetess Meets Her Muse" by Soldier Of Silence
- ""Velvet skin slithers over my body
Caressing my ego and encourages
A grin to play across my sadistic lips
As I trap your hips in my hands" I really like this stanza. And sex and poetry for an eternity sounds like bliss! Good write.
"
Posted by ALBATROSS on "Poetess Meets Her Muse" by Soldier Of Silence
- "great use of imagination, you really explord the theme of the 'killer puppet' well, a sort of urbanised myth, like "evil clowns". And absolutely spot on, how things distort and present seemingly malicious or sinister intent in the dark. Love also the reference to Puppet Master's "basement" - you portrayed the Horror poem well, with a great creeping unease and pyschological slant....wikidness, great stuff..Col :D"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "I Hate Marionettes in the Dark" by Soldier Of Silence
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