Gun Lovers Anonymous

By Soldier Of Silence

Infatuated with cold steel
Nickel plated fantasies
Shiny metal casings and
A seductive recoil

A thunderous boom
Echoes through the chamber
Rocking my very existence
Exciting my nerves

Slinging metal and lead
A tiny grin
Plays across my lips
As I lock and load again

Peppering the target
Colorful spots
Like blossoming flowers
Pop into sight

One by one
Little messengers
Erupt from the tip
Saying hello upon contact

Clings and clangs
Like a symphony
Of violence
Dance around my feet

Gunpowder residue
Splashes my face
While spent casings
Sprinkle my wake

Little rooster-tails
Of brass eject from
My instrument of death
Little periods at the end of life

Exploding gases
Paint a fiery portrait
At the end of my barrel
As I devastate my target

A wall of steel
Created in seconds
By the wrath of one
Determined soul and his weapon

This one is my own
An extension of me
A reflection of my enduring
Will to survive and push on

The last will and testament
Of an indomitable soldier
Who knows no defeat
But only victory

Feeding this machine
One magazine at a time
A hungry beast of steel
Forged for battle

There are many like it
All shapes and sizes
Belonging to warriors
Of equal skill and mind

Hell bent on annihilation
And the taming of nations
Who own inferior products
Of destructive force

But will never truly coexist
With their chosen instrument
Without truly knowing
Its full potential

Because I’ll slay them
Before they have the chance
Like the right hand of God
An Angel of Death

Sworn to protect and defend
And wreak havoc
Given the word
From a higher power

This is for you my friend
My inanimate partner
Given life through my hands
And ending life through the same

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© 2009 Soldier Of Silence
Published on Sunday, May 24, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Echoes of Orpheus On Monday, May 25, 2009, Echoes of Orpheus (357)By person wrote:

    Both a style and subject I've never seen, or at least not like this. You have my top criteria for a good writer; originality. I'll be watching for more sir.

  • Soldier Of Silence On Tuesday, May 26, 2009, Soldier Of Silence (42)By person wrote:

    Thank you much.

  • Mylissa On Sunday, May 24, 2009, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    I love the title and the words really grip the rough exterior that this poem creates. I enjoyed your language and the intensity of this. Outstanding job.

  • ALBATROSS On Sunday, May 24, 2009, ALBATROSS (194)By person wrote:

    The way your voice is uniquely a soldier's is something that I can really appreciate. The depths you describe are things I can only imagine a soldier has to endure and it humbles me. That and the skill of your articulation. This was wonderful. Thank you for sharing and thank you for serving as well!

  • elisa On Sunday, May 24, 2009, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    ahhhh ..my. thank you for opening my mind to a whole new ring of dante's perverted inferno. i love it

  • Soldier Of Silence On Sunday, May 24, 2009, Soldier Of Silence (42)By person wrote:

    Truly a complement coming from you. Big fan of your work. Perhaps you are my venomous seduction. Your work inspires some twisted thoughts in my distorted mind.

  • elisa On Sunday, May 24, 2009, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    lol my tactless self has a fan? thank you much :*) venom is a language, indeed.

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