Intellectual Fingers

By Soldier Of Silence

With Cheeto fingers and Funyun breath
I peck at my keyboard
While my headphones blast sound waves
Into my pretty skull.

Vibrations cock the hammers in my ears
And trigger bullets of wisdom to pierce
My sporadic and often misplaced thoughts
And give them flight from my fingertips.

Sharp hacking sounds give life to my words
As they dance upon my screen in rapid succession
Often squared off and paired up in lines of four
But sometimes centered in four or more

Rhyming schemes or steamy themes
Rarely escape these fiendish fingers
But when they do and to no surprise
A delicious treat and magnificent feat.

But for all that know me they wouldn’t know
That at these late hours my fingers, commonly
Get a mind of their own.

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© 2009 Soldier Of Silence
Published on Wednesday, May 13, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: This poem is seamless! It is an awesome read and I know exactly where you're coming from. A strangely calming piece. Peaceful. Elegant. I adore it.

  • Mylissa On Friday, May 15, 2009, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    Very clever, I like writes like this because it is something that just moves through each word, easy, and seamless. Great write.

  • Soldier Of Silence On Friday, May 15, 2009, Soldier Of Silence (42)By person wrote:

    Thank you!

  • A former member wrote: completely agree with saint,..and let us not forget the fingers are only as fiendish and clever as the mind that drives them,...very clever and entertaining,..well done fingers:)

  • Soldier Of Silence On Friday, May 15, 2009, Soldier Of Silence (42)By person wrote:

    The fingers thank you

  • A former member wrote: this is exactly as it says; intellectual. . .and felt....like braille and bulletholes. . ..

  • Echoes of Orpheus On Thursday, May 14, 2009, Echoes of Orpheus (357)By person wrote:

    This holds a quality I like above all else, originality, a "one of a kind" feeling. write on

  • ebonyamore On Wednesday, May 13, 2009, ebonyamore (100)By person wrote:

    that last stanza was magnificent. also duly noted....succulent use of double entendre *winks*

  • A former member wrote: cool writing

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