The Uncle I Never Knew

By Soldier Of Silence

You held me in your arms once,
When I was born,
Long hair and wiry limbs,
But I don’t remember you.

Mom tells me stories,
Of your addiction,
And your sentence,
But I don’t remember you.

Drugs are your curse,
Prison is your cage,
And you draw a self portrait,
But I don’t remember you.

You look like Jesus,
Eyes full of pain,
Body hardened with time,
But I still don’t remember you.

You got out that day,
And waited for the train,
To bring you back to us,
So that we can remember you.

Something happened that day,
You were found with skinned knees,
But no other clue,
Why can’t we remember you?

There was no funeral,
Just a portrait you sent,
Drawn by your hand,
I wish I could remember you.

You were taken,
The day you were set free,
Your sentence served,
I think God remembered you.

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© 2009 Soldier Of Silence
Published on Sunday, May 10, 2009.     Filed under: "Tribute" and "Poetry"
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  • Carmina Gitana On Saturday, May 16, 2009, Carmina Gitana (149)By person wrote:

    What a vivid portrait, and what a wonderfully restrained piece of poetry - all the more touching for not lapsing into pathos. Great piece.

  • A former member wrote: just....exquisite.

  • Any On Friday, May 15, 2009, Any (39)By person wrote:

    I especially like the way you repeat the word "remember" all the time - that makes it really work.

  • A former member wrote: Heartwrenching. It's a beautiful ode.

  • Huey Lewis On Sunday, May 10, 2009, Huey Lewis (21)By person wrote:

    Wow man. This is really well written.

  • A former member wrote: ...and he is finally free of his torment....

  • melodies revisited On Sunday, May 10, 2009, melodies revisited (30)By person wrote:

    Beautiful write, and I really can relate to this. A great and merciful way of showing God, yes... ~Melodies

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