Comments by All Members
- "This made me want to get my own sword and set off on an adventure. It reminded me just how much of a Zelda fanatic I really am. A vivid depiction of Hyrule, I felt like I was there. Brilliant piece, thanks for sharing. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Sonnet: The Fairy Boy" by CjPsychotic
- "I was tag surfing and ran across this wonderful piece... Well written, perfect imagery, a real pleasure to read... the very first line is one of the best I've read in a while... thanks for the ride"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Battlefield: Heaven" by CjPsychotic
- "ah my friend, you do it so well, damn you and your analytical ways. i liked the concept but just to be nit picky because i am after all your best friend and confidant, it's prescription and i would possibly change bury to inquiry just because why would you bury prescriptions? "
Posted by Unknown on "...I'm Sick...." by CjPsychotic
- "Truly stunning. Amazing imagery and creativity, just my kind of subject and technique also! I'm going to be living in the feel of this one for a while"
Posted by Unknown on "Super Imposed" by CjPsychotic
- "Hello, I too though about that scene with Aladdin and Jasmine! Excellent write about the fascinating and elusive subject of time. My favorite lines are: Forgive for the forgotten time
Dust me off, let me shine
Force me into a seperate vile,
Daintly suffocate me, all the while
Ears are protruded with a familiar
Tick tock--You can't hear me.
Edge"
Posted by Edgewalker on "Grains of Time" by CjPsychotic
- "Thank you Mab. I never have any time to write, and when I do I'm too tired to be inspired (which, ironically, caused me to write about time being so unfair). I'm diggin the picture too. For some reason, when I was writing it, I saw that one instance in the original Aladdin where Jasmine is in the giant sand timer and her hand is the only thing that is out of the sand....Its good to be back."
Posted by CjPsychotic on "Grains of Time" by CjPsychotic
- "time is such an illusion..i came across a picture yesterday and this poem reminds me of it... I'm always happy when you post :) http://silentbeforethestorm.deviantart.com/art/Sandcastles-38374448"
Posted by Unknown on "Grains of Time" by CjPsychotic
- "Dude, this is wonderful. Right up my alley in subject and technique. This is just what I desiderate. Such intelligence...These are the musings of a true poet. And I'm honored to read them."
Posted by ALBATROSS on "Super Imposed" by CjPsychotic
- ""If only a comb-over could protect
the bald knobs of your bed posts
from the sun burn of your 13 watt" still lovin this cleverly coated sex driven piece of in.sanity..boing..boing...boing...."
Posted by Unknown on "Alice in Wonder-bras" by CjPsychotic
- "I just molested the paper with this one like I was on a mission. I, of course, like everything I've written (initially anyways) but this onee just stood out so I'm really working tirelessly on the music to it. If it finds its merry way to youtube I'll let ya'll know. Thanks for the comments."
Posted by CjPsychotic on "The King of the Gods Reborn" by CjPsychotic
- " being scorned and revered simultaneously...like any good god should be. These lyrics have meat on their bones and my teeth are contentedly gnashing through the lines. I too, would be curious to hear the music."
Posted by Unknown on "The King of the Gods Reborn" by CjPsychotic
- "I would love to hear this with music. Especially if its got a tool-like influence. Great lyrics by the way. It seems that it's harder and harder to find musicians with seasoned lyricists. I like!"
Posted by ALBATROSS on "The King of the Gods Reborn" by CjPsychotic
- "This is my second piece that I have read from you and I'm really diggin the way that you think and the way that you articulate it even more. I'll be keeping an eye on you, you've got talent."
Posted by ALBATROSS on "An Honoring Toast" by CjPsychotic
- "*wipes the tears out of my eyes from laughing so hard* you know I'm not afraid to offer you constructive criticism. I've done it before...and I don't throw this word around lightly but this needs NOTHING. It's perfect! I listened to the song while reading....the rhythms are almost a perfect match and my god you're scathingly, wickedly funny (the callouses are getting so much more discouraging)!!!! *grins* BRA-VO!"
Posted by ebonyamore on "Parody: Get Boned" by CjPsychotic
[Next]
