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Volatile Conductivity
By CjPsychotic
(This is the collaborated poem from myself and the wonderful Mab that is
our weapon of choice for the new contest we have going on.)
The waves and whips of your citric flame
launch caustic chills of molten malice down my spine
and welds itself to my heart.
gleaming with trepidation for a taste of your warmth;
my defenses go up in smoke and ignite
against the flicker of your flash-point flavor.
The smoke clad barrels of your eyes
spew a seizing hormonal blaze
accompanied by your acidic lip-locked sentiment;
corrosively annexing the flare from the pyre of my mind.
your thirst for collateral damage
has become a fire inside me;
lazily licking flames that hungrily suffocate my thoughts
until they are engulfed by the intensity of your every need.
Bathing in the suffocation of your radiance,
this symphonic conduction vaporizes my lines
into an ash-kissed porcelain
and leaves me nothing but an afterglow of love;
a mere cinder scintilla,
kindled by your hand.
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© 2009 CjPsychotic, Mab
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A former member wrote:
brilliant use of words. very powerful
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On Tuesday, June 5, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(429)
wrote:
Great poem. It's full of energy and vibrating power, you can feel the electricity of this poem. Congratulations
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On Friday, May 1, 2009, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
this had the flow of ONE MIND - excellent collaboration piece
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On Wednesday, April 29, 2009, ALBATROSS
(197) wrote:
You guys are definitely going to give everyone a run for their money. This just seals the whole poem: "and leaves me nothing but an afterglow of love; a mere cinder scintilla, kindled by your hand." Magnificent fusion of writers.
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On Monday, April 27, 2009, Lady Grinning Soul
(145) wrote:
i couldnt tell whic person wrote which stanza, this was beautifully crafted and will be hard to beat in the contest *eats cookies that mab gave me*
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A former member wrote:
a descriptive smorgasborg,..i never stopped feasting from go2woe,..also i never really took this as a 2 hand write,..unless titled as 'collab' i'd have taken it as one write by one poet,...well done and good luck.
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On Monday, April 13, 2009, carlosjackal
(3018) wrote:
Fusion-extroadinaires!! I feel the battle shall be a tough one ;)
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On Monday, April 13, 2009, carlosjackal
(3018) wrote:
"cinder scintilla"...I love that phrase :)
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On Sunday, April 12, 2009, ebonyamore
(101) wrote:
The fourth and fifth stanzas on this could easily have stood alone for me- though the entire piece was excellently wrought. (your thirst for collateral damage/has become a fire inside me) slapped me across the face. Powerful image. Well done you two!!
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On Sunday, April 12, 2009, CjPsychotic
(30) wrote:
I am too. Usually I can't work with anybody, but this actually came pretty stress free.
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A former member wrote:
I am thrilled with how this turned out.
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