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"Yes, I hear ya. I wasn't too completely satisfied with the sound either. However I did want to emphasize it because I was trying to recreate the intensity and quickness of the fight scene I formed in my head. =>_"
Posted by Henry Coldnight on "Chapter 12.5 To Strike While the Blood is Cold" by Henry Coldnight

"i didnt think the repetition on the words sounded good. it seemed like you were trying to emphasize it too much. other than that i really liked the last section =]"
Posted by BrokenAngel on "Chapter 12.5 To Strike While the Blood is Cold" by Henry Coldnight

":D"
Posted by Henry Coldnight on "Chapter 12 The Vengeance of the Snow Lily" by Henry Coldnight

"great title, lured me in. And I came in expecting the unexpected, another interesting twist, well written again."
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Chapter 12 The Vengeance of the Snow Lily" by Henry Coldnight

"*turns the page* more, give me the next piece :P"
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Chapter 10 A Snow Angel Under the Frozen Heaven" by Henry Coldnight

"like a powerful still of a epic film....well done"
Posted by urbanhumility on "Chapter 10 A Snow Angel Under the Frozen Heaven" by Henry Coldnight

"That was a real nice piece, great message also. ~Ash"
Posted by Ashteroth on "One Bright Burning Soul" by Henry Coldnight

"beautiful and amazing!! ~ hdb."
Posted by Unknown on "Chapter 10 A Snow Angel Under the Frozen Heaven" by Henry Coldnight

"gloomy orb....occasional starlight... I DIG that alot. :) Snake"
Posted by snakeskingrin on "Chapter 9.5 Occasional Starlight" by Henry Coldnight

"There is a Chapter 7.5 between 7 and 8 :p -coldnight"
Posted by Henry Coldnight on "Chapter 8 Angel of Madness" by Henry Coldnight

"Again, making me want that next piece..."
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Chapter 7.5 Fear and Bravery" by Henry Coldnight

":D"
Posted by Henry Coldnight on "Chapter 7 Good Knight, Mr. Bear" by Henry Coldnight

"Hehe finally! Very good. :) you know I liked it!"
Posted by Mars on "Chapter 7 Good Knight, Mr. Bear" by Henry Coldnight

"...I've been looking over these small stories a bit; you remind me loosely of the Xanth novels I read as a teen (look up 'Piers Anthony' if you haven't heard of it); very different setting, but the same aura to them; that's a very good thing, by the way..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "Chapter 7 Good Knight, Mr. Bear" by Henry Coldnight

"These tails are certainly a style belonging only to you, and originality is right near the top in my books, write on."
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Chapter 7 Good Knight, Mr. Bear" by Henry Coldnight

"Well...I do really hope I don't piss your bear off anyway. Very vivd nicely done ~ ash"
Posted by Ashteroth on "Chapter 7 Good Knight, Mr. Bear" by Henry Coldnight

"hehe, no it's not the end yet, I just felt that this one doesn't connect with ch6 very well so I will write 7 and 8 later."
Posted by Henry Coldnight on "Chapter 9 To Kill a Mocking...Angel" by Henry Coldnight

"i love this. is this the end to the series? why'd it go from 6 to 9? lol. but other than that, it's pretty awesome! -mars"
Posted by Mars on "Chapter 9 To Kill a Mocking...Angel" by Henry Coldnight

"I have a new picture for my profile :p"
Posted by Henry Coldnight on "Chapter 9 To Kill a Mocking...Angel" by Henry Coldnight

"pure brilliance -- captivating, tells just enough, and leaves so much for the imagination... I love it!"
Posted by DIATRICUS on "Chapter 6 Go to Bed, Mr. Bear!" by Henry Coldnight

"I've read all of the series to date, now and randomly decided to place my comment on this piece, though I may distribute more to the others later. Overall I enjoyed the series, you have a way of making the reader long for more and leave us trying to grasp at that little thing you taunt us for not knowing, write on."
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Chapter 0 Once Upon a Time...She Falls" by Henry Coldnight

"Your writes leave readers speculating, every single time. I enjoy your work."
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Faint Smile, Goddess" by Henry Coldnight

"wow this is great. i love this series. and the last stanza was heart-breaking. i love the way the little girl knew there was an angel but the no one else did. it was great. keep writing! -mars"
Posted by Mars on "Chapter 6 Go to Bed, Mr. Bear!" by Henry Coldnight

"Shame on me for not reading the first "chapters"...It is a great piece and Ill have to read the others. "
Posted by Narcissa on "Chapter 6 Go to Bed, Mr. Bear!" by Henry Coldnight

"The speaker is a little girl if u guys didn't get that. She is Claire from earlier in the story. Maybe I'll see if I can put that information in the poem somehow. Ty for reading. -coldnight"
Posted by Henry Coldnight on "Chapter 6 Go to Bed, Mr. Bear!" by Henry Coldnight

"A bit disturbing...Awesome! "
Posted by Narcissa on "Chapter 6 Go to Bed, Mr. Bear!" by Henry Coldnight

"xD"
Posted by Henry Coldnight on "Chapter 6 Go to Bed, Mr. Bear!" by Henry Coldnight

"'sharp stuffed-animal instincts' haha, great line Henry."
Posted by DarkPoet on "Chapter 6 Go to Bed, Mr. Bear!" by Henry Coldnight

"Paints a vivid picture in my mind, nice work."
Posted by Ashteroth on "Faint Smile, Goddess" by Henry Coldnight

"'there's no pain greater than painless' ahhh what an incredible truth. my favorite line. great write, and welcome =]"
Posted by thelostmessenger on "Faint Smile, Goddess" by Henry Coldnight

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