Chapter 6 Go to Bed, Mr. Bear!

By Henry Coldnight

I was so happy
to see
that she was still here
when I came home
that night.

I was extra sleepy,
and beat up
by them grown-ups
and their utter clueless-ness.

Mr. Bear and I
both agreed that
next time
if we want to solve
a problem,
instead of telling them
what to do,
we are better off
just do it ourselves.

We slept on the hardwood floor
because we didn't want to
disturb her.

She was truly gorgeous;
with those pretty wings,
she was sure to be
an angel--
and she slept like one too.

I really don't know
how they could be so
blind and did not see her,
seriously.

Mr. Bear told me
that he saw her
leaving,
she tried to sneak out
but she cannot escape
his sharp stuffed-animal instincts.

And I told him that
he should have been
sleeping
and keeping his mind off
angels' business.

Now that she is gone,
I hope my bed wasn't too small;
and I hope she had found
her way back home.

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© 2008 Coldnight
Published on Tuesday, December 16, 2008.     Filed under: "Fiction" and "Poetry"
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  • DIATRICUS On Wednesday, December 17, 2008, DIATRICUS (64)By person wrote:

    pure brilliance -- captivating, tells just enough, and leaves so much for the imagination... I love it!

  • Henry Coldnight On Tuesday, December 16, 2008, Henry Coldnight (15)By person wrote:

    The speaker is a little girl if u guys didn't get that. She is Claire from earlier in the story. Maybe I'll see if I can put that information in the poem somehow. Ty for reading. -coldnight

  • Narcissa On Tuesday, December 16, 2008, Narcissa (391)By person wrote:

    Shame on me for not reading the first "chapters"...It is a great piece and Ill have to read the others.

  • Narcissa On Tuesday, December 16, 2008, Narcissa (391)By person wrote:

    A bit disturbing...Awesome!

  • Henry Coldnight On Tuesday, December 16, 2008, Henry Coldnight (15)By person wrote:

    xD

  • DarkPoet On Tuesday, December 16, 2008, DarkPoet (229)By person wrote:

    'sharp stuffed-animal instincts' haha, great line Henry. Scholar

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