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Faint Smile, Goddess
By Henry Coldnight
Faint smile
that melts away
the sorrow and sadness
A smile,
her confidence,
some arrogance
in her loneliness.
Faint smile
that somehow
gives people strength
to fight against darkness
A smile
of fearless, plus
a hint of shyness.
Crazy,
reckless,
madness...
Her loveless love,
eternal happiness,
all too heartless.
There's no pain
greater than painless,
and yet...
A smile that
was always on her face,
proudly she walks...
Moving on
with a faint smile,
nothing more,
nothing less.
Proudly she walks...
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© 2008 Coldnight
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On Tuesday, December 16, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
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wrote:
Your writes leave readers speculating, every single time. I enjoy your work.
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On Tuesday, December 16, 2008, Ashteroth
(190) wrote:
Paints a vivid picture in my mind, nice work.
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On Monday, December 15, 2008, thelostmessenger
(110) wrote:
'there's no pain greater than painless' ahhh what an incredible truth. my favorite line. great write, and welcome =]
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On Friday, December 12, 2008, Leith Plunkett
(237) wrote:
As NikesRain said this has a really nice flow to it. I loved these lines(There's no pain greater than painless), deep. Welcome to this patch of paradise :-)
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On Thursday, December 11, 2008, Henry Coldnight
(15) wrote:
Thank you
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On Thursday, December 11, 2008, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
flowing and vivid... beauty and pain, strength and sorrow... nicely done... welcome to dp
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