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- "Thank you for your comment!Yeah I guess I didnt think about this much,it was just something I wanted to "get out of me" very fast.but felt safer to stay on the surface at this point:)..."
Posted by estherbell on "Noble mazochism " by estherbell
- "lmao...ouch, there's a sting in the tail and it only took lines to get there! Great juxtaposition between each line...sucker punched with false sincerity, it's a common tie among human lore...brilliance in its succinct slap...ouch again!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "A verbal cuddle" by estherbell
- "I read this on your profile - I think it reads better as one 'block' (such as is on your profile) but that's neither here nor there....my other thing would be it seems to start but never really takes you (the reader) anywhere (as such)...I personally feel, although the poem is by no means bad, it's just scratching the surface and perhaps needs something more and/or added? Anywhere - minor quibbles, I enjoyed the narrative, sceptical tone - welcome to DP...and thanx for your early support - all the best, Col. :D"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Noble mazochism " by estherbell
- "Paved the way, I feel the same. One day, though, we'll open our eyes to a new face to dream about, without the burden of a love lost hanging over our shoulder. That chip will fall, and on that day we'll feel lighter than air. One day..."
Posted by Aleas on "To a Friend who I fell in love with." by estherbell
- "i was the one who prounced 'friend' first. stupid stupid girl i am. never wanted that, just didnt know how to say it. grrr, its a long and winding road, but now i gotta travel it. welcome to dp, ^_^ "
Posted by Unknown on "To a Friend who I fell in love with." by estherbell
- "Brilliant. 'of what was not...' I know the feeling of 'stillborn love'. At least you've still got your words!
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Posted by skully on "Noble mazochism " by estherbell
- "There's something to be said about this despondent self torture. Someone once told me we only escape the fire to run back to the ladder. A vicious cycle that we run so often that making any other decision is just too difficult to handle, too much of a change, even if that change is for the better, because when we make that change, that's when we truly realize we are alone. Without what lost physically, and now, gone emotionally. Where do we go next? I hope you make it to your beautiful poem someday."
Posted by Aleas on "A drunken rant about heartbreak,vomiting,and an answer to "A"." by estherbell
- "a love full of hate... yet the hate never comes until the ends, or nears it. unfortunately sometimes it lingers. so in many ways, it is a hate full of love. well written."
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "A love full of hate" by estherbell
- "Venus fly trap! Beautiful, enchanting, magnetic...then all the sudden your insides are being drained through some sort of oriface that didn't exist before. Unfortunately though, this guy (or girl) will eat some grass, puke up the pieces they couldn't digest, and move on their merry. Son of a B, I wish it didnt work that way."
Posted by Aleas on "Your 6th deadly sin" by estherbell
- "Funny how these things go. I just read this work, after finding you commenting on my work, and it's the same exact thing. Like reading a mirror. I guess everyone goes through this, although for some reason, it feels like only we are the ones that own sorrow, depression, loss, etc., like some sort of monopoly on pain. And that makes the feeling that much more lonely, and everyone else seem that much more confusing."
Posted by Aleas on "A love full of hate" by estherbell
- "lost love. i felt anxious reading such sorrow and longing.(hiding on black pages,searching for your shadow). I think these words are possibly the most beautiful words i have heard.
i loved it and hated it at the same time. i loved the dream like state i felt but hated how much it made my heart ache. truly impressed :-)
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Posted by Leith Plunkett on "A love full of hate" by estherbell
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