A quick desperate Gumtree-ad

By estherbell

Small,run-down,impossible-to-lock
cage
is looking for a broken-winged bird
willing to sing behind the bars.

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© 2008 estherbell
Published on Tuesday, September 30, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: every single time i read this, just breaks my heart. every single time. especially when sometimes singing is the only thing that takes my pain away. ^_^ lovely write

  • estherbell On Tuesday, October 28, 2008, estherbell (53)By person wrote:

    Thank you!Yes,singing and music can heal,or at least comfort us..:)

  • A former member wrote: oh yes, its all ive got left.

  • A former member wrote: short but sweet! Hmmmm.... doesn't a cage need a bird more than a bird needs a cage? Perhaps this captures (pun intended) the search inside all of us, a somewhat beguiled trek from the start, where whoever becomes that bird must relinquish something inherent, essential... do we not all take turns being birds, and being cages?

  • Leith Plunkett On Wednesday, October 1, 2008, Leith Plunkett (239)By person wrote:

    how powerful so few words can be. beautifully depressing. thankyou :-)

  • Narcissa On Tuesday, September 30, 2008, Narcissa (404)By person wrote:

    This broke my heart...

  • Aleas On Tuesday, September 30, 2008, Aleas (171)By person wrote:

    Can I just make a bid for the cage? I've heard the songs they sing too many times before.

  • estherbell On Tuesday, September 30, 2008, estherbell (53)By person wrote:

    well,if not a singing bird,then it will do with an owl or a crow,but a cage needs its bird:).

  • heroineyes On Wednesday, October 1, 2008, heroineyes (113)By person wrote:

    or a tiger

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