Comments by All Members
- "mmhhh...this is one of the best pieces i have read...its more than words...like a sight at feeling...laid bare "
Posted by Unknown on "my minds eye" by Crush Room
- "I love the flow of this poem. It's such an easy read. And your word choice is just the cherry on top! Keep up the good work! "
Posted by Unknown on "my minds eye" by Crush Room
- "not sure what to say on this...except i always see, and feel, everywhere and i feel my own heart skip a beat at the sight.catch and throw away again and the pain and the prison is only skin......poignant at best we are."
Posted by Unknown on "....Daydreamer......." by Crush Room
- "I identified strongly with many of the thoughts here, and I loved that incredibly effective staccato enjambment at the end, with a twist ending on the very last word, no less. I miss you, hope you're doing well. - Scarrzz"
Posted by Scarrzz on "The Irony of Her War" by Crush Room
- "pop back in time to time and maybe if your pen wants to talk... let us hear from you... we don't always keep the light on but the candles are lit and there's always a place to rest your bones... best wishes and good luck in all you do"
Posted by NikesRain on "...and with this" by Crush Room
- "*tosses a blanket over your shoulders hands you a cup of (insert fav. hot beverage here) and sits down with you*... honest open and heartfelt... great write"
Posted by NikesRain on "southern exposure" by Crush Room
- ""A place where the sins of the past are crystal clear, yet the future's pitiful offerings extend only to a blurry mist of indefinate promises." i loved this part, great write"
Posted by chococat_122 on "binary" by Crush Room
- "It is a bit heavy, this write...but what I love about this site is the opportunity to write for yourself...purge your thoughts and try to see some clarity. Mostly, it works for me....xx"
Posted by Crush Room on "Something He Needs To Know" by Crush Room
- "love it...perfect,..a roadhouse for writers,..as one steps out for air,...another steps in to share..."
Posted by Unknown on "C.Rush Room" by Crush Room
- "I appreciate the way you seem to see yourself from the outside here. She... you... gave your life, your essence, to him who touched you. In giving we receive. I hope he understood the precious nature of the gift. "
Posted by Scarrzz on "Something He Needs To Know" by Crush Room
- "Love is founded on the basis of attraction, and a spark...a rare spark...not fused by money, no gold...good write"
Posted by Unknown on "fools gold" by Crush Room
- "Unity . . .What you describe here is Unity - the give and take between two bodies and two souls. It also calls to mind the unity between sex and love. Sex without love desecrates the importance of that bond. I like this because what you desire to give is a good thing. It is painful to not be able to give it, but at least you understand it. Since you know the picture, maybe you will find what you are looking for. I hope your dreams become reality."
Posted by Scarrzz on "my minds eye" by Crush Room
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