Comments by All Members
- "SPLENDID WRITE HERE ! FOR THEY SO LIE, HIDE, AND DENY....YOUR ANGER IS JUSTIFIED AND PROCLAIMED FROM THE GATES OF HELL...AGAIN , VERY WELL DONE..13......"
Posted by 13sonsofgod on "Lady Rage" by Narcissa
- "Chilling to the end! My favorite line is " look into my eyes and see your dying ember because it will be the last thing you remember". Well done!"
Posted by Poeticexorcism on "Lady Rage" by Narcissa
- "so many lovely lines here.... that first stanza, "there's a warmth in your eyes like wine at twilight" ... mmm. "
Posted by Cassette on "Paper White" by Narcissa
- "anessa once called this reminiscent of e.e.cummings... i have to echo that sentiment."
Posted by Cassette on "What's Left" by Narcissa
- "you have a way of hammering in the nail so that we can never get it back out."
Posted by Cassette on "Waiting" by Narcissa
- "the title just drew me in and i was not disappointed to drown in this. that ending though.... oh.... "
Posted by Cassette on "Wet Lilacs" by Narcissa
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