Comments by All Members
- "I like how you kept repeating "I have not slept, I could not leave you behind" that gives the poem a more haunting feeling. Overall, good job ^^ you kept the poem together, the message got through, and it stayed on subject. Nice!!"
Posted by Unknown on "When You Can't Sleep" by Rhys Ki
- "Where the hell are all the comments? Simply put, and simply amazing. First 4 lines and last 4 lines make set this piece above the bar. +tpu+"
Posted by Unknown on "After Autumn's Ashes" by Rhys Ki
- "This has such a beautiful unforced rhythm to it. It captures a sense of longing perfectly"
Posted by Lylani on "Call Me Angel" by Rhys Ki
- "i want those walking the sidewalks
Of town to look upon our glory
And shy from our blinding light.
this reminds me of when i was telling You how we know things that no one will ever experience...
I can promise You this, also:
That we shall spend the rest of our days,
Dearest, drinking from the big dipper;
Swimming in the milky way;
And embracing each other
In the very blazes of the sun.
i love this...this whole piece is fucking gorgeous...i read it with such excitement i couldn't keep up with myself...
You are hope...You are light...You are my Goddess"
Posted by heroineyes on "Writing Our Names in the Books And Tracing Our Tale in the Skies" by Rhys Ki
- "well writen. this sort of thing hurts alot at first but then you are kinda glad it happened. God forbid you marry the shit and then find out. that would be another story. "
Posted by sixsixnine on "Supernova: My Worst Fear" by Rhys Ki
- "I know, dearest, I know. I do quite the same thing when I read your words at home... Sometimes Daniel will come up to me and say, "Well, what's wrong with you?" and I'll just laugh and say, "I'm in love...""
Posted by Rhys Ki on "My Way of Missing" by Rhys Ki
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