Security and Solitude

By Rhys Ki

This life left me empty,
My heart with joy never leapt.
You gave me pain’s antidote,
And, with it, so by it, I slept.

It’s okay, though, just keep me on
A leash and I’ll be your pet.
Then, what you’ve always wanted,
Will soon be what you get;

Nothing will ever happen
To me, I’ll bet.
For that’s the mode to which
I’ve been set.

So, here I stand, with
This gun to my head,
Wondering if it’ll matter,
Since I’m already dead.

But please don’t talk me down,
And please, don’t you fret.
You should already know that
It’s far too late for regret.

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© 2007 Rhys Ki
Published on Sunday, November 4, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • disposable On Monday, September 29, 2008, disposable (103)By person wrote:

    long doesn't = good

  • A former member wrote: Whats gettin you down hon? I've been feelin this way a little myself lately :\ and I know the feeling of no comments too :)

  • Fantecstasy On Monday, November 5, 2007, Fantecstasy (120)By person wrote:

    So very-very true. I love how it shows the invincible feeling that youth have, along with indifference. It may be short but it's very excellent none the less...

  • Rhys Ki On Sunday, November 4, 2007, Rhys Ki (68)By person wrote:

    It's short, but hey.

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