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- "I love this, its said their are 2 types of people, people who get wet in the rain and people that feel the rain. I was always the one that felt it and I think you do too."
Posted by Alchemist on "summer rain" by thelostmessenger
- "Hmm, cool poem. It's not easy to titile but if I were you I'd just simply put Skating, Skating My Fate, or He Caught Me, or maybe even something more random like Sidewalk. But it's cool too as it is. -Coldnight"
Posted by Henry Coldnight on "Untitled" by thelostmessenger
- "Feeling such a need, constant and ever strong, is as weakening as it is amazing. Fulfilling this need can for most people fulfill a life. Though, I'm just speaking from my perspective. As for the piece, I loved it. And I would spare you a favorite, as I tell so many these days... but I have none left."
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Winter, Spring, Summer, Fall: I Need You" by thelostmessenger
- "I actually really liked the depth I derived from this, and I assume it was intentional because of your note to read this poem from your profile. Though I probably saw differently. The last lines, about pretending, were immensely strong here because of the details of a fortune teller. She knows what she's making money from is a lie, and that looking in that ball she sees nothing, always nothing. And yet tells them something anyways. She preaches a lie for a living (I don't believe, some do) and it's hurting her... as you showed it here. If I had a spare fave, I would place it here. I'm sorry to say I don't"
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "The Fortune Teller" by thelostmessenger
- "That struck a familiar chord. Your twist at the end had a forceful impact, illustrating how everyone wants to see the plastic fake smile because it's easier for them. Perhaps it would be better to break the glass and scream. *** You might like my "Journey to Nowhere." This one reminded me of it."
Posted by Scarrzz on "The Fortune Teller" by thelostmessenger
- "A gorgeous melody here. I could almost hear and taste the rain, but I definitely sensed its presence. Again, gorgeous with a lilting, lingering, and yearning feeling towards the end. Almost melancholy, but at the same time an almost certain hopeful feeling because the rain is certain to come again, whether or not we are here to enjoy its many pleasures. And always, the rain will serve as a voice to those who aren't with us or here anymore. "
Posted by Unknown on "summer rain" by thelostmessenger
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