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By thelostmessenger
i weave across the sidewalk
in my brand new blades i skate
my speed is getting faster
skipping over cracks and breaks.
i look over my shoulder
and look back down to my fate
the concretes getting closer
and i shift to stop and wait.
but falling i continue
and my hands reach toward the ground
i close my eyes so helpless
and my lips let a sound.
but midst the dreaded falling
i awake from such a dream
and there he lies beside me
he caught me, it seems.
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© 2008 me_the_messenger
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On Thursday, March 25, 2010, Miztaken4beauty
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wrote:
It's sweet.
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A former member wrote:
nice one. I'm a fan of tasteful rhyming
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On Tuesday, December 16, 2008, Henry Coldnight
(15) wrote:
Hmm, cool poem. It's not easy to titile but if I were you I'd just simply put Skating, Skating My Fate, or He Caught Me, or maybe even something more random like Sidewalk. But it's cool too as it is. -Coldnight
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A former member wrote:
simply put into words full of sadness.
I can truely relate. ~ hdb.
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