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- "Wow this poem left me speechless! This is by far one of the best poems I have ever read. "Two years ended in two days/And those six months/just weren't long enough" was just an amazing stanza. The flow was nice, the words went well together and I felt as though I could relate. Wow!!"
Posted by Unknown on "[surely my bed is out to get me]" by asphyxia
- "reminds me of a song, "im nothing but a sandcastle, baby dont blow me away". the heart is like that i think, feels like bits and pieces of it are always washing away. "
Posted by spikedwithLUST on "The Boy Who Knocks Down" by asphyxia
- "Wow I think a lot of us get into these lasting funks where we need something to finally fall into place instead of just being another thing that went to hell. Very upsetting but an interesting read."
Posted by Dilated View on "Of Moons & Stars, Ruins & Scars" by asphyxia
- "(safe meant the arms of a lover… And now… it means no lover) Such a sad transition. These two lines really say it all. The giving of yourself takes a piece of you...I love how raw and honest the piece is, it made me ache to read. Beautifully crafted.
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Posted by Leith Plunkett on "love.apprehension" by asphyxia
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