The Boy Who Knocks Down

By asphyxia

And he was
the ebbing of the waves.
I was dry land.
My seashore body
always yearned
his cool touch.
But he was going
as soon as he was coming,
and, well,
I was landlocked.
Every time 
we crashed together,
I knew we'd be but brief.

Oh, he would depart
and take with him
small granules of me.
Yes, I would wash away;
he'd leave me feeling less
than what I once was.

Now, I am a 
mighty sandcastle
crumbled.
Knocked down
by some boy
who likes the feel
of wet, broken things
between his cringer-cracks.

Who would like
such a thing as that?
Who could like such a thing?

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Copyright 2012 asphyxia, Jolene Korrin Long
Published on Sunday, November 18, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Tuesday, May 7, 2013, carlosjackal (2787)By person wrote:

    Really cool write, nicely expressed.

  • FadedBlues On Sunday, November 18, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...nice write. losing small pieces of yourself to misplaced love, as the waves draw bits of the beach slowly into the ocean...

  • Invisible Girl On Sunday, November 18, 2012, Invisible Girl (134)By person wrote:

    Great analogy... Well done. Much enjoyed

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