The Boy Who Knocks Down
By asphyxia
And he was
the ebbing of the waves.
I was dry land.
My seashore
body
always yearned
his cool touch.
But he was going
as soon as he was coming,
and, well,
I was landlocked.
Every
time
we crashed together,
I knew we'd be but brief.
Oh, he would depart
and take with him
small granules of me.
Yes, I would wash away;
he'd leave me feeling less
than what
I once was.
Now, I am a
mighty sandcastle
crumbled.
Knocked down
by some boy
who likes the feel
of wet, broken
things
between his cringer-cracks.
Who would like
such a thing as that?
Who could like such a thing?
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Copyright 2012 asphyxia, Jolene Korrin Long
Published on Sunday, November 18, 2012.
Filed under:
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On Tuesday, May 7, 2013, carlosjackal
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Really cool write, nicely expressed.
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On Sunday, November 18, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...nice write. losing small pieces of yourself to misplaced love, as the waves draw bits of the beach slowly into the ocean...
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On Sunday, November 18, 2012, Invisible Girl
(134) wrote:
Great analogy... Well done. Much enjoyed