Comments by All Members
- "This has a lot of good ideas in it. I hope you go with what is right and keep going strong."
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Grist" by johntaiyu
- ""These stories
have a way
of taking on
a life of their own" And fear by itself has the urge to increase these stories, involuntary. Thanks for sharing!"
Posted by Dismalmind on "The Voices of Children" by johntaiyu
- "A poem. I have no idea what to say. I fear I will sound foolish, but this made me think of a metal feather, that had sharp blades instead of soft down. "
Posted by Lux on "So There I Sat" by johntaiyu
- "well that was rather too well done and may be translated to fit any addiction ... I love "and how life itself
now makes it's own gravy," ... but your poem is well tempered with the flip side too ... congratulations , well deserved
"
Posted by kinkifrog on "The Karma of Sobriety" by johntaiyu
- ""we know,
in ways those folks
whose lives weren't blessed
with the cocoon of liquid bliss
cannot understand,
what illusion,
suffering,
and redemption
really mean." - great lines. I enjoyed this piece very much! Hard-hitting and real. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "The Karma of Sobriety" by johntaiyu
- "This reminds me of home. Thank you for taking me back to the Mountains. I miss the cold intake of breath at the crack of dawn, and the stillness it brings to the mind. Not a numbing stillness. Just a peaceful and enlightening stillness. With the cold oxygen running through my lungs and veins I found clarity in places that were once foggy with doubt. This poem, to me, shows that it is possible. Thank you again."
Posted by Unknown on "Ice Storm" by johntaiyu
- "I liked the indian and his jail time and his wife and their daughter. Liked the nice ending too...special. "
Posted by Unknown on "21 Years" by johntaiyu
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