When the Water Came

By johntaiyu



When the water came
and filled the streets and yards
we watched from dry ground,

and thought how terrible it all was,
what happened
to them,

as if you can really separate
stuff that happens
to the thems
from stuff
that just happens
to you,

and along the way
maybe do that trick
where if it doesn't happen to you,
it doesn't happen
at all.

Which, of course,
only seems to work
when the water's not rising
around your own ankles.

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© 2006 johntaiyu
Published on Saturday, November 4, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Great rhythm, flowed like river.

  • A former member wrote: wonderfully intense and vivid

  • Mari On Saturday, June 9, 2007, Mari (419)By person wrote:

    haha

  • TaintedButterfly On Sunday, November 5, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    I've been through a flood before and it wasn't fun... no one should ever think it cannot happen to them. Poignant piece dear. Julia~

  • Alanarchy On Saturday, November 4, 2006, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    A great thought. Just in case, we all should know how to swim. One day, your gonna get some rain, and sometimes you get so much, the highground'll wash away.

  • A former member wrote: i love your mind

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