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"Again, another poem that conveys very familiar feelings. There were many spelling mistakes, but the wording, pauses and the vivid description of abandonment are all so well put, I forgot all about it while reading it. Nice work."
Posted by Unknown on "i dont mind" by dismal silence

"I feel this way sometimes too. "
Posted by suicidalsecrecy on "(keep telling myself)" by dismal silence

"i liked this struggle within. the give in and the fight. the unsureity and the desire. very emotional piece. well done."
Posted by RubyXero on "Fuck if I know" by dismal silence

"Excellence and cunning in a twisted tale of woe. Me likey you poem. : )"
Posted by Taunting The Reaper on "Fuck if I know" by dismal silence

"its crazy to find out how many people have felt what you have felt before."
Posted by Pureheartless on "Fuck if I know" by dismal silence

"Awesome! This was explosive and rhythmic with all the right expression!"
Posted by Spiral Downward on "Fuck if I know" by dismal silence

"Been there felt that. Awesome write though. It was a refreshing thing to read this morning."
Posted by Templer on "Fuck if I know" by dismal silence

"i always look forward to reading you're new writes, and this one, as always, is brilliant =)"
Posted by dead_inside on "A moment of Clarity" by dismal silence

"I actually tried singing your poem and it makes for an amazingly emotional screaming/in pain sort of song..lol..hope i made sense...I like the way you poured alot of emotion into it Keep it up! "
Posted by Unknown on "A moment of Clarity" by dismal silence

"Hmm, darkened version of children's(man those writes are typically nasty!) rhyme. Keeps the flow pretty well."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "A moment of Clarity" by dismal silence

"wow this was..stunning..holyshit..powerful"
Posted by Muse on "hushed sanity" by dismal silence

"i like how you show how people just don't see... i like the message."
Posted by RubyXero on "sleeping" by dismal silence

"awsome write. loved the "carve away the numb" line"
Posted by Unknown on "(keep telling myself)" by dismal silence

"good write. "
Posted by Unknown on "Awakening of Self" by dismal silence

"fuck...:)"
Posted by RubyXero on "hushed sanity" by dismal silence

"that was hot.. thanks for pointing out how badly i need to get laid. LMAO. Just playing. Great Write though! Sexy"
Posted by aCiD aNgEL on "oh god" by dismal silence

"ahhh dear what a painful subject you decided to tackle. fighting our own being is always a tuff battle. great write"
Posted by dying angel on "(keep telling myself)" by dismal silence

"needing screaming, to cut, that's what i got, good write regardless"
Posted by Johny_D_Lewis on "(keep telling myself)" by dismal silence

"this is an interesting peice, fighting battles within ourselves, tricky thing in' it"
Posted by Unknown on "(keep telling myself)" by dismal silence

"this one descibes me. I like guys doing most of these."
Posted by Unknown on "oh god" by dismal silence

"Awesome I love the point, elegant rhyming and feel to it. The link between ages/time can be a static feel, something that I feel I havnt obtained but feel in glimpse. I should maybe too stand more in the wind ^^ great write"
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Fall of Day" by dismal silence

"nicely done."
Posted by Unknown on "dead inside" by dismal silence

"Nicely written, though I would omit the curse words as they're always changing, and are so...undefined. Just my thoughts. Good work overall. I feel the pain.. nice write"
Posted by Unknown on "bleeding out of me (poem of rage)" by dismal silence

"I love it. I can feel how you do, and relate with you thorugh your one poem, I will come back for more. And sorry, spelling mistake :P it's label. heh"
Posted by Unknown on "Just because you dont know (older one)" by dismal silence

"Can i lable you....Brilliant? ~*~Dying_Angel~*~"
Posted by dying angel on "Just because you dont know (older one)" by dismal silence

"Wow this shows so much pain. The way you put it together is beautiful. great write. ~*~Dying_Angel~*~"
Posted by dying angel on "bleeding out of me (poem of rage)" by dismal silence

"love the way form mimicks content...definitely rageful, perhaps more of a gushing wound?"
Posted by Unknown on "bleeding out of me (poem of rage)" by dismal silence

"wow i know how this feels sorry♥"
Posted by coly on "Just because you dont know (older one)" by dismal silence

"lol its dementidly cute lol"
Posted by coly on "Mr Popples the Killer Teddy Bear (series so far...)" by dismal silence

"Short and Sweet....Lovely. "and i will sing/screaming out my pain" ~*~Dying_Angel~*~"
Posted by dying angel on "Song of the storm" by dismal silence

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