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sleeping
By dismal silence
if you saw me sleeping
would you know if my heart wasnt beating?
would you know if i wasnt breathing?
or would you think after 12 hours, im still dreaming?
A dream...
no
but yet
this thing that makes my mind scream
still seems
far far better than that of reality
if you saw my darkened eyes
staring in the depths of your soul
would you think my heart is coal
would you think the chill around me is cold..
perhaps the cold breath of death?
if you saw me bleeding
would you call me names...
crazy, insane,
mentally dazed
sterotypical things...
would you think after 12 hours im still dreaming,
or breathing
is my heart still beating...
or am i not just sleeping
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© 2005 hushed_sanity
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On Wednesday, March 22, 2006, RubyXero
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wrote:
i like how you show how people just don't see... i like the message.
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On Sunday, December 25, 2005, weyvern
(80) wrote:
reminds me of what i tried to write in one of my poems but it was nothing to this! brilliant
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On Saturday, December 24, 2005, veingo
(533) wrote:
I agree with dark awakening. I like the flow, and feel of it. ^V^
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A former member wrote:
makes me feel as if you are alone with no way to tell people how you feel
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