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i dont mind
By dismal silence
silence...
as i try to fathom
who i am
what the ...
what am i doing
i can barely speak
my voice is to shaky
my body...to weak
soul is to meak
lift me up
from this torch that
...
consumes me
or just leave me
i dont mind anymore
or do i
i can't really tell
my minds assylum is numb
i dont mind
i dont mind
{stop this screaming mind}
i dont mind
silence...
as i try to speak
my last breath
as i murmer
the cause of this mental death
{i dont mind}
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© 2005 hushed_sanity
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A former member wrote:
Again, another poem that conveys very familiar feelings. There were many spelling mistakes, but the wording, pauses and the vivid description of abandonment are all so well put, I forgot all about it while reading it. Nice work.
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On Saturday, December 24, 2005, veingo
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wrote:
This sounds like a feeling I've had many times. ^V^
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A former member wrote:
yeah likr crison said its sad and yeah it does bring something out in the person who reads it...kudos
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On Saturday, December 24, 2005, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
this hit a nerve, sad...
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