bleeding out of me (poem of rage)
By dismal silence
i will SCREAM
and RANT
and RAVE
til the pain is over
scarlet suicide notes
and silent lullabies
from ANGER
and HATE
and RAGE
built up inside of me
eating away at me
i dont want symphony
i dont want love
you'll never have the best of me
there is nothing left to give
all this ANGER
and this PAIN
all this RAGE
in my suicidal CAGE
cage cage
where the butterfly lies
broken inside
tryin not to die
I will CHOKE
on this LIFE
and
S
U
F
F
C
A
T
E
s l o w l y
laughing
and crying
not knowing
what the FUCK is going on
fuck me
love me
hate me
beat me
use me
abuse me
just dont take
this little piece thats
left of me
left
ha
its being eaten away
COLD
NUMB
DYING
SCREAMING
HATING
every fuckin part of this life
SHAKING
on the floor
CRYING
the wounds begin to sore
BLEEDING
this out of me no more
ANGER
HATE
RAGE
PAIN
all
b
l
e
e
d
i
n
g
out of
m
e
Comments on "bleeding out of me (poem of rage)"
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A former member wrote:
Nicely written, though I would omit the curse words as they're always changing, and are so...undefined. Just my thoughts. Good work overall. I feel the pain.. nice write
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A former member wrote:
love the way form mimicks content...definitely rageful, perhaps more of a gushing wound?