Fall of Day
By dismal silence
Weakened by the fall
Days are done and gone
Condemn none, forgive all
Follow your lifes call
Take it in,
Every last word
Never repeat
Evil things you've heard
Breathe in our ancestors air
We are no better than they
Hear the wisdom they share
This is the fall of day
Weakened by the fall
Nights are cold and long
Darkened sun, forget all
Memories are gone
Push it out
Every last thing
Always rethink
What evil can bring
Breathe in our ancestors air
We are no better than they
Hear the wisdom they share
This is the fall of day
Shattered walls shall fall
Weakness now is gone
Shaking hands, hating all
Hear the gun sounds call
Take me in
One more suicide
Breathe in our ancestors air
We are no better than they
Hear the wisdom they share
This is the fall of day
My tithes are paid
Paid with my tears cried
Comments on "Fall of Day"
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On Monday, January 9, 2006, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Awesome I love the point, elegant rhyming and feel to it. The link between ages/time can be a static feel, something that I feel I havnt obtained but feel in glimpse. I should maybe too stand more in the wind ^^ great write
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On Tuesday, December 27, 2005, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
I agree with everyone, definitely elegant and so true. Great piece. Julia*
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A former member wrote:
I agree... great piece
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On Tuesday, December 27, 2005, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
this was very refreshing to read....not many write about what they see in the world and how it makes them feel....such as the things unseen but not unfelt...this is different and very original...thanks for sharing....knight
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On Sunday, December 25, 2005, weyvern
(80) wrote:
The world is broken and poetry like this heal it a little you have a true gift
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A former member wrote:
damn it made me want to cry.... i read it to my mom she started to
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On Saturday, December 24, 2005, dead_inside
(32) wrote:
beautiful piece of writing, great talent.
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A former member wrote:
This is absolutely elegant! Great work.