A moment of Clarity
By dismal silence
Slit my wrist and hope to die
Stick some maggots in my eye
Cut through every limb of mine
Just to breathe one more time
Screaming for this to break
Bleeding, I begin to shake
Wanting something more than this
Needing more than I can get
Ohhhhh I just wish that this would end
Ohhhhh I can't take this anymore
Ohhhhh I just pray that this would end
Ohhhhh I've crumbled on the floor
Pray to God and wonder why
Wish I could escape and cry
Slice through this cold heart of mine
Just to sigh one more time
Screaming I start to break
Bleeding I can't stop this shake
Wanting to get out of hear
Needing to rid this dismal fear
Ohhhhh I just wish that this would end
Ohhhhh I can't take this anymore
Ohhhhh I just pray that this would end
Ohhhhh I've crumbled on the floor
Ohhhhh I just need for this to end
I am pleading please my friend
Ohhhhh I can't take this anymore
I am screaming please within
Ohhhhh O pray that this would end
I am worthless now my friend
Ohhhhh I've crumbled on the floor
I am bleeding now within
Ohhhhh I just wish that this would end
Ohhhhh I can't take this anymore
Ohhhhh I just pray that this would end
Ohhhhh I've crumbled on the floor
Ohhhhh I've crumbled on the floor
Comments on "A moment of Clarity"
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On Monday, February 26, 2007, dead_inside
(32) wrote:
i always look forward to reading you're new writes, and this one, as always, is brilliant =)
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A former member wrote:
I actually tried singing your poem and it makes for an amazingly emotional screaming/in pain sort of song..lol..hope i made sense...I like the way you poured alot of emotion into it Keep it up!
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On Monday, January 8, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(423) wrote:
Hmm, darkened version of children's(man those writes are typically nasty!) rhyme. Keeps the flow pretty well.