Comments by All Members
- "It's amazing how tormented we can become and how unable to move or act,sometimes even after a great deal of time has passed. Your word choice, I felt, did a great job of not only visually presented your idea but also of allowing the reader to feel the physical sensations associated with it. Not always easy to pull off. Write on! :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "Dragonfly Pin Pricks" by AnotherWitheredRose
- "I felt this way with a therapist I had to see as a teenager but as an adult and being able to pick who I see I've found one I enjoy going to even when nothing is going on in my life we just talk about everyday stuff. Maybe it just takes finding someone you're comfortable with. Great piece though, congrats on POTD"
Posted by Unknown on "gotta love therapy" by AnotherWitheredRose
- "Wow! Good job. Not crypticly written, making understanding your feelings and message easy. But also written expressively, allowing readers to sympathize and empathize with you. Keep writing!"
Posted by Unknown on "no escape(im my own prison)" by AnotherWitheredRose
- "i agree with twilight melodies. this was heartwrenching. i can relate and since i can't seem to be able to write anything right now, i'm glad that i read this. it helped. thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "*(just don't forget)*" by AnotherWitheredRose
- "i've felt like this before..not exact situation but the feelings are the same...but once i realized that "living" that moment even if it ends...it worth it..."
Posted by Unknown on "id like you to know" by AnotherWitheredRose
- "i feel like i'm seeing this happen to someone very dear to me. it isn't a pretty sight...and it's hard cuz only they can truly help themselves and it doesn't matter wut we do...we can only watch..."
Posted by Unknown on "Parting" by AnotherWitheredRose
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