a skeletons path
By AnotherWitheredRose
dew drops
at the tip of my tongue
you make me eat my frozen heart
its lying in the grass
(i perserved it for you)
head over heels
(in love)
face buried in the dirt
(that lies under the flowers)
i dont remember why
i thought this would be beautiful anyway
i sent you my dreams
in a paper plane
but i think it crashed somewhere
behind the mountains of reality
the dead trees consumed in an orange glare
is this the glittering flare
(my distress signal)
i didnt realize i was this lost
i should be better at rejection by now
he(you) the frost bite king
kissed me all over (cold as stone)
but ive melted the skin from the bone
with flames of anger my shell falls away
as does wax from a candle
a puddle of useless colors lies at my feet
(it hurts so much- but- it feels so good to feel)
i turn around and walk down
the right side of the forked road
where it will lead i dont know
but *please* dont look my way
im just a skeleton
and im too pissed off
to pick up the pieces
Comments on "a skeletons path"
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A former member wrote:
A great read, way better than anything I write, will hope to read more
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A former member wrote:
This was fun to read fast. Excellent pieace of WRITING!!!
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A former member wrote:
"i sent you my dreams in a paper plane
but i think it crashed somewhere
behind the mountains of reality"- woah. this was harsh, in the most beautiful way. the images you used to paint this were breathtaking. absolutely wow.
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A former member wrote:
OMG!!! Best Part of the poem!
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A former member wrote:
Holy...alright, that's it. *falls to her knees and clutches at your hand* My Lord, sing to me a tune of destruction again. My ears long to hear your every word. This...just...woah. *Evangel*